a GHAZAL in ENGLISH ... by ... Hafeez Sheeraazii

salaam dosto
how are you? hope you all will be well, iA.

yes, you have read it correctly! i’m posting an English Ghazal. this Ghazal is the FIRST one i’ve ever seen…it’s a Ghair muraddaf Ghazal, meaning it had no radeef [the last one or more word that repeats in the first two misr’as of the matl’a and then follows in all the alternate misr’as]. however, this Ghazal is NOT in meter [bahr] or vazan.

i’ve also seen a murass’a [well balanced] Ghazal with radeef and qawaafii [the rhyming words that are found just before radeef] and properly metered…[in bahr and vazan].

it’s an experimental Ghazal at best.

enjoy!

regards
_______KKF


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Re: a GHAZAL in ENGLISH … by … Hafeez Sheeraazii

:eek: at first sight this seems just an attempt to make qafiyas (without any thought) or probably I don’t have developed taste of Englsih poetry

Re: a GHAZAL in ENGLISH ... by ... Hafeez Sheeraazii

same here...i think the only thing he cared for is having qawaafii right...it's a nice try though! :)

may be we should have a English Ghazal competition on GS! :)

Re: a GHAZAL in ENGLISH … by … Hafeez Sheeraazii

Idea bura nahin.. per meri English to matlae main hi khatam ho jae gi :hehe:

Re: a GHAZAL in ENGLISH … by … Hafeez Sheeraazii

to, aap se yaa mujh se kaun Shakespeare yaa Elliot ke ishTanDarD kii shaa’irii kii tavaqq’o karegaa? :smiley: broken inglis ij good a-nof! :smiley:

Re: a GHAZAL in ENGLISH … by … Hafeez Sheeraazii

but not ghazal.. lets first try for English Rubai :hehe:

Re: a GHAZAL in ENGLISH … by … Hafeez Sheeraazii

u mean quatrain? ruba’ii maiN nahiiN samajhtaa k kia hotaa hai? apun desi nai hai na! :smiley: :stuck_out_tongue:

Re: a GHAZAL in ENGLISH ... by ... Hafeez Sheeraazii

yeh aap loag kya ghit pit ghit pit ker rahey hain angrezi mein

Re: a GHAZAL in ENGLISH ... by ... Hafeez Sheeraazii


ham khiT piT nahiiN kar rahe...ham firangi jazbaat kii tarjumaanii kar rahe haiN! :D

Re: a GHAZAL in ENGLISH ... by ... Hafeez Sheeraazii

Angrezi shayri ko Desi touch de rahe hain