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*Originally posted by Golden Scorpion: *
Tum tu Nayab ho itrana tumhaiN bhata hay
Hum tou itranay ki bas naql kia kartay haiN
(Golden)
:D
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...wah wah....kia baat he...:)
Re: Re: Re: Ye Meray Mehboob ki Ada hay
Good stuff GS. :k: per aakhir mein yeh aisey nahien hona chahye
SamnadarooN ko ubhart(ey) hoo
?
and here’s my take on your extension of the poem. 
Talatam-e-Dil jwaaN ker dey
ju tera mehboob la zammaN hay
Pyaas bhi ubhaarey, peeney bhi na dey
abeyyeh bata! yeh keiisi ada hey 
aur haan BM praa jeee good one
This is truely beautiful... Khush rahoo... and keep writing...
Re: Re: Re: Re: Ye Meray Mehboob ki Ada hay
Tnx Choudhry … For Correction … Offcourse it should be… UBHARTAY … 
And… Nice Extenssion
This is truely beautiful… Khush rahoo… and keep writing…
Shukria Dilse .. 
Dekh lo.. Hum bhi Keh saktay haiN Shair 
Jee haan wohi to hum dekh rehe he ..:nahnah:
:k: :k: :k: :k: :k:
Tnx KaHaNi
Nice to See U here
Nayab… Tum bas Dekhti hi raho 
:k::k: thats real nice
Nawazish
wow .. nice buddy …laykin last line samjh nahi ai … 
Shukria jano..
Matlab Arz kara hay …
ASHIQ Chand se Mukhatib hay ke… Tum JO kuch karti ho wo Tum ne meray Mehboob se seekha hay… Meanz… Ke… Ye tou meray Mehboob ki aday hay .. BUT tum Ne issay Apni Property Samjh rakha hay 
Samanda Full mooon ki Night Buhut Zyada Josh miaN hota hay na… TOu… Meant to say ke… Chanda Gi.. Tum Meray Mehboob ki Ada ko Adopt kar ke Samandar ko Ubhar rahi ho… 
Kuch Palay paRa…
haan ab palay para 
nice one
Tnx Speedy... :)
And... Sinner... Ab bhi Shukar karo ;)
GS bhai.. BM & chodry sahab… It’s so.. so… so… WoW 
Now… koi mujhey bhi shayari karna sikhaye