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since the mood is so sad here, I thought I would add somethign diff here
in my tears I am free to swim I am free to ski either jet ski or water ski or maybe a boogieboard too cuz they aretears of joy tears of laughter
...appalling effort. :D
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…the rest of it goes a little like this. (how i know, it’s my material she was writing). 
In my Tears, i am free to drown
feeling cold within, i can’t help but frown
the warmth, the happiness, is what i once had
nothing to cherish, with me feeling so sad
No-one to share with, my feeling and thoughts
there is compassion, aswell as remorse
I shall, i will, overcome this delude
a week from now, i’ll be in a good mood.
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In my tears I am free to drown
My dignity, character and principle are all I own,
Please Lord forgive my sin,
What a disobedient boy I have been,
To those I have wronged, forgive me,
To those I loved remember me.
Yesterday prepared me for today,
Ready I am, yet I pray,
I do not fall or falter,
Or my ambition does not alter.
Let the battle inside me,
Not take precedence over the one around me,
I will strike my opponents down,
The strength from you, the sword my own,
My death will not be a loss,
Except to those attached to material gloss,
Peace, forgiveness, love, and happiness I trace,
Once I find my resting place.
These are not tears,
But droplets of memories of previous years,
What could have been, would have been,
Rest assured, I am what I should have been.
In my tears I am free to drown,
My dignity, character and principle are all I own.
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OMG! Orpheus & OMG Empty...Totally zabardast!
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You know for us guys its about how cheap and quick the hair cut's going to be. We rarely go into all of the deep and un discovered meanings of this and that.
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thanku, thanku. :D
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...appalling effort. :D
effort? sheesh
apalling yes,
effort no...
if i had put any effort whatsoever in it, it would not have been appalling
it would have truly been absolutely horrid :D
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but I still have the only poem* here that is not moping whining depressing poem.
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OMG! Orpheus & OMG Empty...Totally zabardast!
Thank you :), a bit long tho..
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but I still have the only poem* here that is not moping whining depressing poem.
X2 bhai ( i mean bhai as in Indian gangsta , thug kinda way), you are right in what you say.
and p.s.... do you mean fictitious?:D
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angerji nai aati apun ko...fictional fictitious..jo bhoi hota hai..
effort bilkul naheen lagayee
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lol
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I'm free to drown in my own sorrows
Every day i feel like there's no tomorrow
My soul rests with the hope that you come
My emotions suppress my happiness
I'm dizzy, damn day, like i'm sippin that rum
The sun that used to shine on me day in day out
Now my eyes feel no joy, everything's all numb
Lyrics surround me
Rhymes do me in
It's a hard knock life i live
Outta the whole stack i feel like a crumb
I wanna keep goin but, the fear grips me
you might think my words sound dumb
:p
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In my tears I am free to drown My dignity, character and principle are all I own,.
This one reminds me of the JLo's
All my pride is all I have
Ll cool j: pride is what u had, baby girl I’m what’s u have
:)
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I'm free to drown in my own sorrows Every day i feel like there's no tomorrow My soul rests with the hope that you come My emotions suppress my happiness I'm dizzy, damn day, like i'm sippin that rum The sun that used to shine on me day in day out Now my eyes feel no joy, everything's all numb Lyrics surround me Rhymes do me in It's a hard knock life i live Outta the whole stack i feel like a crumb I wanna keep goin but, the fear grips me you might think my words sound dumb
:p
Man
kitnay poets chupay bethay hain yahan..
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teggy, this your own material?
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Yea just thought sum’in up real quick 
ps: 
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someone was being nosey while getting their hair done 
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you dissin my material huh?
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:CareBear: naaaah it needs no dissin! :@:
You're a hardcore rapper
i'm the new kid on da block
You run round with bazooka loaded
i can't even show my glock
If u startin spittin rhymes
i'll prolly end up in a shock