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@ ASN: Thank you ![]()
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Then what kinda brain storming are you looking for? ![]()
People can either write 1 for you or you can test your skills here and they will tell you how it is.
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As soon as I close my eyes I can see your smiles
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^ thats very typical ![]()
come up something unique.
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Brainstorming means like maybe a sentance inpired but not a whole poem copied. Its more romantic to use your own words ![]()
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*Tum Paas Aaye Yoon Muskaraye
Tumne Na Jaane Kya Sapne Dikhaye
Ab To Mera Dil Jaage Na Sota Hai
Kya Karoon Haye Kuchh Kuchh Hota Hai
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Maybe its for the same person and its still stands true ![]()
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Brainstorming means like maybe a sentance inpired but not a whole poem copied. Its more romantic to use your own words :)
Well wouldn't that kill the whole purpose then? Unless it's directly from you? :)
I'll still help you out though. I'll pick up from ur last line
As soon as I close my eyes I can see your smiles
As if I can go on like this for miles and miles
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Flashback...and memories of those warm nights come flooding back
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Flashback...and memories of those warm nights come flooding back
she still left me, wondered many times what did I lack
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Flashback...and memories of those warm nights come flooding back
And my heart starts to sing in tunes like a track.
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I feel that you are with me all the time
despite the distance of thousands of miles
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wah wah wah ![]()
kya baat hai gurooo ![]()
kahaan say seekha hai ![]()
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I feel that you are with me all the time despite the distance of thousands of miles
And for such love, all the hardship mountaines I can climb
With nothing on my face but many smiles
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she still left me, wondered many times what did I lack
I finally saw through your lies
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I finally saw through your lies
When the feelings between two start to die
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I finally saw through your lies
yeh rona dhona bund karo abb
khatein hain khana mil kar
HHL say kaho bazar ka khana laye
khud bhi khaye ham ko bhi khilaye
uss kay baad khayein gay icecream
then khailein gein aik game
jismay u scream and I scream we all scream
for again little more of icecream :@:
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I cannot still forget you...there is a fire that will eternally burn in my heart for you
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Lying in my bed I hear the clock tick, and I think of you
Caught up in circles
confusion is nothing new
:)
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yeh rona dhona bund karo abb khatein hain khana mil kar HHL say kaho bazar ka khana laye khud bhi khaye ham ko bhi khilaye uss kay baad khayein gay icecream then khailein gein aik game jismay u scream and I scream we all scream for again little more of icecream :@:
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nursery rhymes ; please try again*