Re: Usoolon Par Agar Aanch Aaye…
Kia Ghazal ya Image of Shair
Re: Usoolon Par Agar Aanch Aaye…
Yaar mera to mutaalea na hone k baraabar hai, isi liye main ne to kabhi da’wa kia hi nahi k mujhe kuch pata hai, main ne socha itna wazni naam hai janab ka to ho sakta hai k ghazal bhi inhi ki ho 
, ab mujhe kya pata tha k haath ho gaya hai 
, mohtaram ko ye pata hi nahi k “dusroN ki poetry Intakhaab mein post karte hain”.
MODZ to kuch zyada hi mod ho gaye hain, un k liye eik mashwara hai k GS ka web page edit karein, or Intakhaab k aage ye likhein " Yahan doosroN ki poetry post karein " aur Sho’ra-e-GupShup k aage ye likhein " Yahan sirf apni zaati tehreer post karein "
Aur koi hal nahi iska coz post karne waale ne kabhi rulez wala thread to kholna hi nahi hota. Tusi ki kehnde o!!!
Re: Usoolon Par Agar Aanch Aaye…
MODZ to kuch zyada hi mod ho gaye hain, un k liye eik mashwara hai k GS ka web page edit karein, or Intakhaab k aage ye likhein " Yahan doosroN ki poetry post karein " aur Sho’ra-e-GupShup k aage ye likhein " Yahan sirf apni zaati tehreer post karein "
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Re: Usoolon Par Agar Aanch Aaye....
As Salaam Alaikum....
Itne saare sawaalon ke Jawaab de pana mere liye abhi mumkin nahi hai...
aur rahi baat Waseem Sahab ki Gazal ki to mujhe nahi lagta ki Waseem Sahab ki gazal kisi bhi ta' arruf ki mohtaaj hai.
Waise is nashist me mai naya tha maine isse pehle bhi kuchh Rahat Indori sahab ke ashaar post kiye the...
Lekin aaj aap sabke saame apne chand ashaar rakhna chahoon ga, aur ummeed karta hoon ki aap log mere kalaam ki hifazat karen ge....
Arz Hai...
Muddat Hui na poori hui ek arzoo....
Ab Dil ki arzoo hai koi Aarzoo na ho..
Poet: Saud Musheer...
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Poet: Saud Musheer
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Thak kar taraash hi liya ghar ke sutoon me....
Mai jiko tha talaash raha us hujoom me....
Afsoos ye nahi ki mujhe mil sake na wo...
GAm yeh hai mai phirta raha yunhi fuzool me...
Kya dair hai kya mai hoon kya hai mai khana...
Soochoon ga kisis roz baith kar sukoon me....
Khamoshyon ka shauq ab raha nahi mujhko....
Mai marr bhi gaya toh bhi rahoon ga Junoon me...
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Re: Usoolon Par Agar Aanch Aaye…
apne har har lafz ka khud aaina ho jaaon ga…
usko chhota keh ke mai kaise bada ho jaaon ga…
Poet: Waseem Barelvi
Re: Usoolon Par Agar Aanch Aaye…
Bat choty bary ki nahi If I made a mistake I always ask the MODS to move this thread I open by mistake U did not attempt any try. Thats it.
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**Sach kahon DIL PR MAT lyna ab agar yeh Ap ki apni shairi bhi hy tu yaqeen kro yaqen nahi raha ho sakta hy is bar Adab Arza ya Pakeeza jysy risalon sy kis Gumnam shair ki shairi post kr di ho.Thats why they are asking for poets nameZamil or Mujhy jysy Mittalia dushman logon ki malomat ky liy {oet ka nam likh diy ajay tu acha hota hySo agar Sharo gup shup main ghalti sy bhi a jay tu Move ho sakta hy Na maloom ho tu likh do" Namaloom":gumnam: **
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Re: Usoolon Par Agar Aanch Aaye…
**Jaane dein GN jee, itni be-aaitbaari bhi achi nahi hoti.
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In ki “ghazal” mein, eik she’r mein inhoN ne qaafiye ka khayaal nahi rakha
“GAm yeh hai mai phirta raha yunhi fuzool me”
so us se to ye in ki apni hi lagti hai, baaqi in k jhoot sach ka muaamla Allah k saath hai so don’t b so rude na, theek
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"GAm yeh hai mai phirta raha yunhi fuzool me"
so us se to ye in ki apni hi lagti hai, baaqi in k jhoot sach ka muaamla Allah k saath hai so don't b so rude na, theek :)
Ap kehty hain tu man lyty hain, Warna Aytbar tu khtam ho giya hy:(
Agar fazool me sy in ki apni lagti hy tu shaid in ki apni hi ho:D