bohot achii nazam hai perfectionist!!!
and some great shers m_isbah
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~Kiya haaq wo jeena hai jo apnay hi liyay ho
Khud mit kar kisi aur ko mitnay se bacha lay~
Thanks Maheen. m-isabah’s verses are nicer than those I posted
very nice
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in my dreams i was drowning my sorrows , but my sorrows learned to swim
Thanks. BTW your signature statement is impressive. Its must be very sad to know your sorrow learnt swimming while you were going to drown them…frustrating…utterly frustrating..hai na?
kiya baat hai....very very nice
"thandee aah"
Kay hum tu Dhoop main baarishh kay woh qatray hain jo gir ker, dar-o-deevar per hi sookh jaatay hain.....
nice poetry ..
btw sir aap ne mere mobile par call karni thi main aa jata
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wese mera ana bhi aapke kisi kaam nahi ata
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dil darya, samandaron donge .. kaun dillan de yan jane ..
jane na jane gul he na jane .. bagh tou sara jane .. ;~)
“thandee aah”!!! ab agar nik hee itna tapish wala rakha ho to aur kar bhee kia sakte/saktee hain aap? Thanks BTW
aap pehlay mobile number to info mein dalein
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sahee kaha aap ne aapka aana mere kis kaam ka? Aaein to woh aaein, aane se jin kee aaye bahar