I personally like it, good one but you posted it incomplete. Here is the rest of the lines from the same poetry:
wahan khoon ki holi aam naa ho
is aangnan-e-gham ki shaam na ho
jahan mansaf se insaaf milay
dil sab ka sab se saaf milay
ik aas hay aisee basti ho
jahan roti zeher se sasti ho
umeed abhi kuch baaqi hay
ik basti basnay wali hay!