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The shair waitingwalismiley
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thorra sa mushkil kaam hey 
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not at all 
bahaney baazi nahi chaleygiiiii
jaldi make up some political shairrr
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^ Ladies first :D
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Shaer aap hain points at signature mai nahi 
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meiN to "pal do pal" ka shaer hooN... 24-hour ka nahi :D
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jee nahi janab, hum khush fehmiyaan nahi paalti … haqeqat bata rehe hen:p
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Amal, do you write on social/political stuff as well, i mean poetry?
Jaun Elia and Habib jalib have written some really nice shairs on political and social issues!
but cant really recall any … aadhe aadhe yaad hen!
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jee nahi janab, hum khush fehmiyaan nahi paalti ... haqeqat bata rehe hen:p
Acha agar khush-fehmi nahi hey to LP ko aek political sheir to suna do please :)
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bahaneybaaz:vivo:
aap adha post kijiye Amal complete ker dainge 
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sunana tou aapne bhi pareyga
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Acha agar khush-fehmi nahi hey to LP ko aek political sheir to suna do please :)
pure shair yaad nahi hote humein :(
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adha he likh dain :D
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Amal, do you write on social/political stuff as well, i mean poetry?
Nope rangoli...itna dimaag nahi hey merey paas :( ... Habib Jalib was an amazing poet and so was Jaun Elia.
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Nope rangoli...itna dimaag nahi hey merey paas :( ... .
kabhi tou sach kaha :D
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sath bhi do tou nashukre loog:emmy:
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barra saath dia aap ney :(
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adha he likh dain :D
just for you Little princess ...:) I remember few lines from the famous poem "main nahi maanta" By Habib Jalib!
Tum ne loota hai sadiyon humara sakoon
Ab na hum per chalay ga tumhara fasoon
Chara gar men tumhain kis tara se kahoon?
Tum nahi charaagar
Men nahi maanta ... men nahi jaanta!
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Nope rangoli...itna dimaag nahi hey merey paas :( ... Habib Jalib was an amazing poet and so was Jaun Elia.
you should give it a try .. read that piece by you in PP thread, you write well :)