So You Think You Can Write ? (P-1)

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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sorry mjhe poetry krni nhi atii … yeah to aashiqoo ka kaam hai .. hehe

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It will be my talent you Jack in the BOX :smilestar:

And it will be in Urdu (or something like that :stuck_out_tongue: )

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**People Stay on topic ! **

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I finished my poem…and I am super excited about it :cb: :yahoo:

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apni taraf se apne mujhe phulane ki koshish ki bt time limit is very short,i’ll try my level best 2 post.

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Thanx AK! i received your poem. Will post on due date :slight_smile:

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sunoo …
mai tum say yeah kehna chahta hoon …

dard ka ek silsila say rhta hai ..
yeah dil bhi sambhalta nhi ..
tanhai abb dasti nhi …
teri yaddo mai aisa khoya rhta hoon…

ankhoo ko teri piyas rhti hai ..
tumhe ankhoo mai sama skta hoon ..
nah hi ansoo bha skta hoon…
sari raat …
khud say rooth’ta rehta hoon … khudh ko hi manata rehta hoon.

mai bas tum say yeah kehan chahta hoon
tmhre roothne say pehle hi .
meri jaan nikal jati hai …

mai toota jata hooon …
tanha ho jata hoon …

Sunoo
mai bas tum say yeah kehna chahta hoon.

“MAI TUM SAY AB BHI MUBHAT KRTA HOON…”…ZIA

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main ne bhi ik likhi hai:barbie:

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theek hay phir pm karo PK :faizy:

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ok

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I’m working on my poetry which will be posted on due date :slight_smile:

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Thanx Shazia A! i received it and will be posted on due date :slight_smile:

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LKK why Samii posted his poem here? humesha without reading the rules hima nd BM the same :emmy: so what are you planning to about it??? :5:

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he hav taken permission prior to post here :slight_smile:

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^LKK kyun jhoot bole rahe hoooo…maine samii se poocha woh kyun post kiya tha..and then he said he didn’t know that he had to PM it…tum larke sub jhoote hooooo :barbie:

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ji nahi us ne me se permission li thi :snooty: tum jaldi ho :zobo:

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mujhe kuch bhi jaldi nahi hai…y u give him special treatment :pcg:

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b’coz he asked. If u asked then u also had same :slight_smile:

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Rules are rules…change kyun kar rahe ho :pcg:

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Oky i’ll c what i can do :snooty: