Sheir ka jawab sheir se dein

IS · March 9, 2018, 11:19am

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janay kya muj say ye zamana chahta hay
toorh k dil mera, mujay hansana chahta hay

janay kya baat jhalakti hay meray chehray say
Har koi Mujay Aazmana chahta hay

Imran

LP · March 9, 2018, 11:23am

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IS · March 9, 2018, 11:27am

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its just poetry

guru8904 · March 9, 2018, 12:15pm

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Zamana tou aisa hai, aisa hi rahay ga
Har baat, har shakhs ka tamaskhur urata hi rahay ga
Tumharay cheray pai jo dard, jo karb ayan hai
Azmana chahay bhi tou azma na sakay ga zamana
Dekhtay jao jatay hain kahan yeh hansi uranay walay
Tamasha khud na bun jaeen, tmasha dekhnay walay

pktun · March 9, 2018, 12:32pm

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**Aik aur bhi hai…
Koi enjj da jadoo duss mahiya
Me gherat likhan, Hakumat nun aa jawey
**

guru8904 · March 9, 2018, 12:46pm

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Koi hor shai cha mang sohneya
Rab aap mun paraan kar gheinda ay
Inhan begharatan koon waikh kay
Inhan dian harakataan dekh kay

LP · March 9, 2018, 3:16pm

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Nun means?

LP · March 9, 2018, 3:16pm

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@muqawwee123, kidher hain janab?

guru8904 · March 9, 2018, 4:06pm

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Wo khali dil kis kam ka jis mein tamana hi nahein
Goya ik murda jism ho jis mein rooh nahein, jaan nahein

guru8904 · March 9, 2018, 4:09pm

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Urdu likhay bina samjhana zara mushkil hai. Yeh noon hai (noon wao noon) jis mein akhri noon ghunna hai. Is ka punjabi mein matlab hota hai “usay” ya “unhein”
“Hakumat nun aa jaway” ka meaning hua “hakumat ko aa jaye”

guru8904 · March 9, 2018, 4:45pm

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LP, are you receiving my PMs?

LP · March 9, 2018, 5:29pm

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JazakAllahKhair. Got it.

pktun · March 10, 2018, 1:31am

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**Kash keh tu mera ho jaey
Kash ye tamanna teri hoti
**

guru8904 · March 10, 2018, 2:28am

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Meri bhi ik tamana hai ay dost
Kay tu arzoon, tamanaoon sey niklay
Apna pyar panay ki justajoo mein
Apna yar mananay ki koshish mein
Meray dil kay itna kareeb aa jaye
Kay tujh to dekhtay hi yeh dewana dil
Itna muztarib ho jaye
Ji chahay tujhay banhoon mein lay loon
Apni aghosh mein samait loon mein tujhay
Waqt magar kum hai meray paas meri jaan
Yeh aag jo dil mein lagee hai
Kaheen rakh rakh na ho jaye
Teri bewafioon sey lartay lartay
Yeh dil kaheen pash pash na ho jaye
Kaheen teri yeh kask kash suntay suntay
Yeh jism laash laash na ho jaye

LP · March 10, 2018, 2:32am

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Ab dil k ye tamanna hai, ae kash aisa ho
Ansoun k sath ankhon se hasrat bhi nikal jaye

guru8904 · March 10, 2018, 2:40am

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Hasratain dil mein rehti hain, ankhoon mein nahein
Hasrat nikalni hai tu dil cheer kay dikhao
Hum ankhon sey tou dekhain tumharay dil mein
Wo jo basa hai, hum hi hain na?
Aisa na ho jissay hum apna aap samjhay thay
Wo zaalim tou darasal koi aur hi nikla

muqawwee123 · March 11, 2018, 7:46am

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LP · March 11, 2018, 7:48am

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shukr hai!!
Will you join in?

muqawwee123 · March 11, 2018, 7:51am

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Yes. Why not. Karna kia hai? apni poetry to nahin post karni?

LP · March 11, 2018, 7:57am

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:yess:
You can post apni ya kisi aur ki.