~*~ Share ur favorite Ashaar about Bachpan ~*~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**Welldone Khushkhabri … i was just forgetting it …thx for sharing **

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Buhat buhat shukarai for such a nice wishes …

& Wah wah meray yaar Darwesh kia khub yaad dila dia … Now this one is for you …

***Barish Main Bjaigay Kachay Aanganoon Key Khusbou’en
Chain Jub Dil ka Churain Yaad Kar Laina Hameen
Dheemay Say Kanptay Naram Lahjay Main Day Tumhain
Koi Zindagi Key Duaeen Yaad Kar Laina Hameen ***

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**No prob, Wasy MashaAllah tu ny koi shyr chora nahi ju submit na kia ho really great collection, bari mehnat ki hy.:) **

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**Wah wah zabardast:) **

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WoW u all doing alot of Gr8 work & sannan yaar plzzzz zara tafssel se batao ke ye pic per urdu main adobe se kaise likhte hain.

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Sad Affect this is the combination of Inpage & Adboe ... u can convert inpage blocks as GIF file and then past it in Adobe ... i think u little bit knows abt Adobe then u can do it easily

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Jigar Sannan...Khushbash,

This one is for you...

KABHI KABHI KE TASSAWWUR SE JI NAHI BHARTA
MERE KHAYAAL MAIN AAOU TU BAAR BAAR AAOU !

This is for everybody:

BUZURG KAH GAYE THEY"UMRAT DARAAZ BAASH "
BACHPAN KI SHARAARTON KI SAZAA DE GAYE MUJHE

dARWESH.

Challenge for BH, E6 & NV
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*Wah wah Yaaraa Chah Cho Gay ho .......... yaar bachpan bhi kia khub cheez thi, nah fikar na faqa Aish Karay Kaka *

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I was thinking that cute asha’r on child hood has finished but I just read this she’r in THread of DIYAa and couldn’t stop my self to compose …….. Hope u’ll like it ……..

*Palkeen Bhi Chamak Uthti Hain Sotay Main Hamari
Aankhoon Ko Abhi Khawab Chupanay Naheen Aatay
Urnay Do Parindoon Ko Abhi Shokh Hawa Main
Phir Loot Kar Bachpan Kay Zamany Naheen Aatay *

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Ki abat hy kia bat hy Lajwab kuch or nahi kha ja skta is ky liy

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*i thought that child hood poetry finished but today this Ghzal caught my attention and hope u all will like it too ............... :) *

Takhtian Likhtay Likhtay Jawan Ho Gaiy Umar Key Bairyan Kaat Dein
Hum Nay Bachpan Main Apnay Qalam Kia Tarashay Kah Khud Apni Ungalian Kaat Dein

Jiss Key Chaoon Main Chopaal Kay Rang Jamtay Thay Aab Woh Shajar Bik Gia
Jin Pah Daleen Thien Bachoon Prindoon Nay Peengainn Wohi Tahnian Kaat Dein

Sir Bachatay Kah Izzat Bachatay Kah Aadab-E-Hamsaigi Thay Buhat
Hum Nay Basti Nah Chori Magar Apni Hisay Key Sub Bairyan Kaat Dein

Aab Kah Gaoon Gia Tha To Nahreen Shajar Aur Rastay Nah Mil Sakay
Yaar Logoon Nay Sarkain Bananay Key Khawahish Main Pagdandian Kaat Dein

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[QUOTE]
*Palkeen Bhi Chamak Uthti Hain Sotay Main Hamari
Aankhoon Ko Abhi Khawab Chupanay Naheen Aatay
Urnay Do Parindoon Ko Abhi Shokh Hawa Main
Phir Loot Kar Bachpan Kay Zamany Naheen Aatay *
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very very nice sharing....thnx....!<!-- / message --><!-- attachments -->

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[QUOTE]
Takhtian Likhtay Likhtay Jawan Ho Gaiy Umar Key Bairyan Kaat Dein
Hum Nay Bachpan Main Apnay Qalam Kia Tarashay Kah Khud Apni Ungalian Kaat Dein

Jiss Key Chaoon Main Chopaal Kay Rang Jamtay Thay Aab Woh Shajar Bik Gia
Jin Pah Daleen Thien Bachoon Prindoon Nay Peengainn Wohi Tahnian Kaat Dein

Sir Bachatay Kah Izzat Bachatay Kah Aadab-E-Hamsaigi Thay Buhat
Hum Nay Basti Nah Chori Magar Apni Hisay Key Sub Bairyan Kaat Dein

Aab Kah Gaoon Gia Tha To Nahreen Shajar Aur Rastay Nah Mil Sakay
Yaar Logoon Nay Sarkain Bananay Key Khawahish Main Pagdandian Kaat Dein
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this one is also very nice.....thanx Sannan<!-- / message -->

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Wah SAN ji kia bat hy yeh prh kr tu mujhy apna Rygistan yad a giya whan bhi byriyan thin jab ham chuty thy ab tu ryg bhi nazar nahi ati byrian tu door ki bta.Stan rh giya hy bas bari khubsurat nazm hy
(Bachpan tu ho giya How About Colleg days;)

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Thanks Maham & GS .... yes this nazam really attract me a lot and i miss my home town which was just like this but now a days now barries, no fields ...everywhere just buildings ................ There were three famouns trees and now only one tree have been left in my area ........
College life kay baray main ....hhhhmmm she'ri kum kum hi milti hay waisay .....

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excellent one sannan bhai…:k:

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MG: it seems u've become permanet reader of GS ...... anyway thanks for ur encouragement ...............

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Bohat khoob:))

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**
Kaleem Sahib aap bhi koi bachpan kay baray main koi poetry shar karain!!!! **

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I just found that nice stuff and thought to share with you ……. Hope u all will like it ….. :slight_smile: