SHaam!!

WiseGuy · April 3, 2003, 3:23pm

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*Originally posted by Swera: *
Good as always:)
Thanx 4 sharing:)
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Thanks :)

WiseGuy · April 3, 2003, 3:24pm

Re: Re: SHaam!!

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *

Great.... thanks for sharing.....
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Thanks Dilsay Dilsay :)

WiseGuy · April 3, 2003, 3:25pm

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*Originally posted by ~MuNiYa~: *
Bohaath khoob
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Bohat bohat shukriya MuNiYa... :):):)

BrokenSky · April 3, 2003, 3:58pm

:k:
…

WiseGuy · April 3, 2003, 4:08pm

:k:
… BrokenSky

_ChiNi · April 3, 2003, 4:11pm

Great poem…I just hope its not based on a true life experience…because its so sad. But thankx for sharing. :k:

WiseGuy · April 3, 2003, 4:45pm

Thanks for liking the poem…
No, Its not real life experience, I just kinda liked the the wordings so I shared it with you guys…

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 3, 2003, 8:30pm

sham ho gae mein loat kei ghar a gai
ghar mei hei na kursi na hei charpai:hehe:

WiseGuy · April 3, 2003, 10:16pm

Acha jee

aap yaqeenan kisi ghalat ghar main ghus gayee
niklo bhagoo doro warna abhi police hai aai

Swera · April 4, 2003, 3:28am

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*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Thanks :)
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U welcome. :)

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 4, 2003, 10:32am

ghalet gher mei a bih gae hon to darnei ke koe bat nahe
kal he police mei bhartee hoa meri saheeli ka bara bhaee:hehe:

Azad · April 4, 2003, 11:07am

:k:

BrokenSky · April 4, 2003, 11:12am

WaH:flower1:..
:k:…
wow great shair by WG and MM:k:…

WiseGuy · April 4, 2003, 5:16pm

maloom hai hum ko hamari police ka hai yah haal
jahan saheeli kay bhai hon thanedaar wahan jeena mahaal

WiseGuy · April 4, 2003, 5:19pm

WiseGuy · April 4, 2003, 5:35pm

Thank you Azad

WiseGuy · April 4, 2003, 5:38pm

Shukriya BrokenSky,
aap is ko great shair kehtay hairat hai…

ghazal_kisi_ke · April 4, 2003, 11:31pm

beautiful:k:

WiseGuy · April 5, 2003, 4:31am

Thanks Ghazal Kisi Ke

Swera · December 20, 2003, 2:06pm

Phir paRi achi lagi....:)