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I have already mentioned that this little angel has a great potential of Poetry just need appreciation, she has poetry virus in her blood, I am really proud to read her this ghazal… you made me proud rani 
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ME…or my FRIEND!!! 
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very neat and nice choice rani :k:
thanks 
nice poem.
u welcome:kiss:
Ya to tum hi “nida”, kuch keh na sakeen
ya woh samajhne mein, der ker gaya
Wah :k:
Woh samjhnay main dair kar gia
thanx sis
sachi mein ITNI achi thhi??
mujhe to khud hi nahi pata chala…
kher…aap log keh rahe ho to ho gi!
thanx
@ my friend…
yeh to..BOHAT ACHHIII HAIII…r u sure AAP keh dost ne likhi hai..and not some famous shair! *p
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good one gadhuu unkil :k:
ps: snooty
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*Originally posted by Rani Pakistani: *
aik chota sa diya, aik ghar ko raakh ker gaya
aik nadaa'n sa dil, zindagi ko barbaad ker gaya
Sadiyon se qaid thha, dil mein aik toofaan
Aaj poore jism ko, be-bus ker gaya
Husrat si uttTi thi dil mein, soch keh uske baare mein
aik chota sa nadaa'n sa dil, zeethh ko be kaar ker gaya
Aankhon ki baat kabhi, mein honton par na la saki
zindagi ki is lajja se dil, ashkon ki bahaar ker gaya
Ya to mein hi usse, samajh na saki
ya woh samajhne mein, ghalti ker gaya
Mene to kehna chaha tha, par khhof tha bohat dil mein
agar dosti keh is rishte ko bhi, woh be-naam ker gaya
Sowoo'n to khwab uske, jagoon to sapne
mere dil mein aa keh apni hi mehel ko, woh raakh ker gaya
Zindagi mein hi jannat dikhaayee, jeevan mein jeena
phir zindagi ko jahannum bana keh, khud ko anjaan ker gaya
Aankhon mein sapne uske, honton pe ussi ki baatein
woh ajnabi thha lekin, dil ko ura le gaya
Ya to tum hi "nida", kuch keh na sakeen
ya woh samajhne mein, der ker gaya
by my friend
--Nida Khan
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Rani I have not read something so beautiful in a long time, thanx for sharing the beautiful ghazal with the rest of the world. it actually brings out feelings that i couldn't describe in words.
thankx
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wao…man…i didn’t know it was THAT GOOD!!! waaooo…
can’t believe it…sub ko itni pasand aa rahi hai 
thanx yaar
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some ppl have the gift and they can put their feelings in to words, otherz of us can only read beautiful poetry and relate.
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