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un say mehfil mein bhi mulaqaat to kam na thi mager
uff woh aadab jo bertey gaye tanhai mein
aisa laga kay bal kha kay dhanak toot gai
us nay waqfa jo lia naaz say angrai mein
tu es qadar mujhy apny qareeb lagta ha
tujhy alag se sochu to ajeeb lagta ha.
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is qadar toot ke tum pe hamain payaar aata hai
apni baanhon mai bharain aur maar he dalain tum ko
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thanku lonely, nice poetry guys
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tum salamat raho her rooz ke marney waley
Ek Pal Jo Ussay Bhoolnay ka Sochta HooN
Mayri Saansain Mayree Taqdeer Say Ulajh Jaati haiN
Phir Itnay Mayoos Kiyoon Ho Uski Batwafai Pay NASIR
Tum Khud Hee Tou Kahtay Thay K Woh Sab Say Juda Hay
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Tum Sa Ho Koi Jahaan Main Magar Hobahoo Na Ho
Aur Mayri Tarah Kisi Ko Tayri Justujoo Na Ho
Aarzoo Hay Yahi Keh Bas Rahay Tayri Aarzoo
*Aur Iss Aarzoo Kay Baad Koi Aarzoo Na Ho *
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this is such a beautiful beautiful thread. her ik sher pe waari jaun mei! lovely!
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Aaj yeh tanhai ka ehsaas kuch hadd se zyada hai,
*** tere sang na hone ka malaal kuch hadd se zyada hai***
*** phir bhi kaat rahe yeh jiye jane ki saza yehi sochkar, <O:p***
shayad is zindagani mein mere gunaah kuch hadd se zyada hai. <O:p
Aaj yeh tanhai ka ehsaas kuch hadd se zyada hai, tere sang na hone ka malaal kuch hadd se zyada hai phir bhi kaat rahe yeh jiye jane ki saza yehi sochkar, <O:p shayad is zindagani mein mere gunaah kuch hadd se zyada hai. <O:p
yeh verse romantic ya pyaar bhara kis angle se hai ?
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***Nain Jaan ye jahan aisa nain hai
ye bandhan tootney wala nain hai
na uterey ga teray pyar ka rang kabhi
ye dheema hai magar ye kucha nain hai***
thanku lonely, nice poetry guys
jaan denay kaa kahaa mainey to hans kar bole tum salamat raho her rooz ke marney waley
haha...nice one! :)
Aaj yeh tanhai ka ehsaas kuch hadd se zyada hai, tere sang na hone ka malaal kuch hadd se zyada hai phir bhi kaat rahe yeh jiye jane ki saza yehi sochkar, <O:p shayad is zindagani mein mere gunaah kuch hadd se zyada hai. <O:p
yeh verse romantic ya pyaar bhara kis angle se hai ?
I think it is more pyaar bhara angle but then I guess piyar bhara angel can turn into a romantic angel...
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Nice Going $id & All..:k:
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Baat Agar Zarf Ki Hay Tou Youn Karlo !
Tum Jeet Jao Haar Mayray Naam Kardo
Us Say Muhabbat Ka Taqaza Tou Yeh Hay Faraz !!
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Jo Jaan Say Bhi Pyaray Thay Woh Log Nazar Say Door Howay
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