!POETS FIGHT CLUB~ AN EFFORT FOR SI

being_lonely · May 24, 2006, 4:05am

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sannan sahi jaa rahay ho (bhool gaya) lolz so dude aaj kal baray forums k chakar lag rahay hain :)

sara_farooqui · May 24, 2006, 4:17am

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badam kiyon nahi khatey app:naraz: ,

sara_farooqui · May 24, 2006, 4:18am

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Kis samt chalain kon si dehleez pe bethein
is sheher mai kuch bhi ho riyaklar buhat hain

Sannan · May 24, 2006, 4:23am

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**iss he par yaad aya … actually i 4got to eat almond , now i’ve one

Shaher Kay Loog Mukhlish Hain, Hamdard Hain, Par Hamari Suno Hum Jahan Gard Hain
Dagh-E-Dil Nah Kissi Ko Dikhana Sajan, Yeh Zamana Naheen Woh Zamana Sajan**

Sannan · May 24, 2006, 4:24am

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hahahahah … yaar bus zara change kay liay tumharay peechay peechay chal daitay hain hum bhi …

being_lonely · May 24, 2006, 4:27am

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sara g aaina ghusa ooye ay karak chaa da pyaala ay

being_lonely · May 24, 2006, 4:47am

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N/a

sara_farooqui · May 24, 2006, 4:48am

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Ji Janab to buhat din ho gay ehian,...... shsher pe sheir likhtey
ab zara mon ka Zaiqa change kijiye
oor topic ka rukh motrey hain
*oor agla topic humain diya hai,,, MIRZA saheb ne...... *
**sheher se,,,**
Tark e Taa;luq ki taraf,,,
kesa,,,??
ab jaldi se sab alert ho jain oor is per sheir bhejiye...

sara_farooqui · May 24, 2006, 4:56am

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wo samney aaye to hum bhi muskura diye
jin ke tark e taluq pe kabhi toot ke roye they

sara_farooqui · May 24, 2006, 4:57am

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*tark taa'luqat pe roya na main na tuu *
**lekin yeah kiyaa k chen say soya na main na tuu

**

being_lonely · May 24, 2006, 4:59am

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*har aik maslay ka hal nikal rakhti thi
zaheen thi, mujhay hairat main daal rakhti thi *

*main jab bhi tark-e-taluq ki baat karta tha
woh rokti thi mujhay, kal pay taal rakhti thi *

Mirza_Ruswaa · May 24, 2006, 5:08am

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Aadaab dosto::

pehlay aik she'r Mohtaram BL ki nazar :
aap nay meray baray main na janay kiya kuchh keh diyaa lekin apna haal to yeah hai :
Na thee haal k jub hamen apni khabar rahay dekhtay auroN k aib o hunar
PaRi apni buraa-iyoN par jo nazar to nigaah main koee buraa na rahaa

aur ab tark e taa'luq

Tark e taa'luq apni khata ho aisaa bhi ho sakta hai
woh ab bhi pababd e wafaa ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai

aik aur

iss tark e taa'luq pe pareeshaaN to hooN lekin
ab tak k teray saath pe hairat bhi bohat hai

sham

Sannan · May 24, 2006, 5:26am

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*U'll find 3 last topic in this ghazal 1. sheher , 2. Mohabat, 3. tark-e-taluq *

**TARK-E-TALUQ

chali hai **sheher **main ab kay haw a **tark-e-taluq **ki
kahin ham se na ho jaey khatam tark-e-taluq ki

banawat guftagoo main ,guftagoo bhi ukhri ukhri si
taluq rasmi rasmi sa,ada tark-e-taluq ki

hamian wo sabar ke is mor tal lanay ka khawahaan hai
kay tang a jaeyn ham ,maangain dua tark-e-taluq ki

bahanay dhoondta rehta hai wo tark-e-marasim kay
isay waisay bhi adat hai zara tark-e-taluq ki

ye bandhan ham nay baanha tha salamat ham ko rakhna tha
bohat koshish to us nay ki sada tark-e-taluq ki

wo milta bhi mohabbat **se hai lakin aadatan Sajid
kiye jata hai batain ja baja tark-e-taluq ki

sara_farooqui · May 24, 2006, 5:28am

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Tsleem Mirza saheb,,,

her giz guman e tark e taaluq nahin mujhay
milnay ki ik ada hai teri berhumi mien bhi

sara_farooqui · May 24, 2006, 5:30am

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Wah wah,, MashAllah... Sannan ji,,,

Ehl-E-Wafa Se Tark-E-Taaluq Kerlo Per Aik Baat Kahein.....
Kal Tum Un Ko Yaad Karo Ge, Kal Tum Unhein Pukaro Ge

Sannan · May 24, 2006, 5:40am

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**Buhat Khoub …kia yaad dila diay …

main aiyna tha, woh maira khayal rakhti thi
main toot-ta tha to chun kar sambhal rakhti thi
main jab bhi tark-e-taluq ki baat karta tha
woh rokti thi mujhay, kal pay taal rakhti thi **

sara_farooqui · May 24, 2006, 6:17am

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Kitni achi thi na Wo
:) :)

Sannan · May 24, 2006, 6:26am

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**oye duplicate ho gai ya woh aik he thi **

Sannan · May 24, 2006, 6:28am

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**Wah Wah kia sher yaad aay hay iss he baat par

aey dost hum ne tark e taaluq kay bawajod
mehssos ki hay teri zarort ...kabhi kabhi**

sara_farooqui · May 24, 2006, 7:17am

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Yeh mujhey kiyon nahi yaad aaya…