!POETS FIGHT CLUB~ AN EFFORT FOR SI

sara_farooqui · May 13, 2006, 10:49am

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**khelon gi to jeeton gi naa:naraz: **

Mirza_Ruswaa · May 13, 2006, 10:53am

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aadab sara
ab khail bhi leejiyay na - diloN say nahee - alfaaz say - ashaa’r say

being_lonely · May 13, 2006, 11:01am

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sara abb to mirza sahab nay bhi keh dia plz ghusa chor dain n plz post warna hum bhi nahi,khailain gay

sara_farooqui · May 15, 2006, 3:06am

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Ohhh,,,,, Mirza Saheb ne keh diyaaaa abto khelna hi parey ga,,,,,,, ab to mana nahi ker sakti,,,,
To ji ajj ka Mazmoon haii,,,,

"Muhabbat" + "Muhabtaain" + "Muhabbaton" in mei se kisi per bhi shier bheja ja sakta hia,,,
okk
to shuroo karain kheil????
lijiye,,,,,

Muhabbbaton mai dilon ko saza to milni thi
Dil e tabah terey kam mautber bhi nahi
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Unhain hum se humain un se Muhabbat ho bhi sakti thi
Zaroorat mand dodno they yeh soorat ho bhi sakti thi

Mirza_Ruswaa · May 15, 2006, 4:35am

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Sara jee Aadaab
shukriyaa nawaazish aap nay hamaari ilteja qubool farmayee:

do sher bayak waqt zehn main aagayay hain so hazir hain:

ik lafz e muhabbat ka itna sa fasanaa hai **
**simtay to dil e aashiq phailay to zamana hai

*Muhabbat chahiyay baham hameN bhi ho tumhaiN bhi ho *
*khushi ho is main chahay ghum hameN bhi ho tumhaiN bhi ho *

sara_farooqui · May 15, 2006, 5:01am

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Tasleem Mirza Saheb,,,,

aik sheir oor yaad aa gaya...per is bar mujhey akela na chor dijiye ga,, sab hisa lain ge na???,,,

Koi bhi koye muhabbat se phir nahi guzra
To shehre ishq mai kia akhri sada thi meri?

Mirza_Ruswaa · May 15, 2006, 6:26am

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waah saraaa kiyaa sheir hai lutf aagaya behtareeeeen

Sannan · May 15, 2006, 7:09am

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Sara g, Its pleasant to c u on first place, plz. Accept my heartiest cong. And hope you’ll continue this ………..
but aap key ranjeeda taqree nay sara maza kirkara kar di aur mahoole sagwar ho gya …. But u r right that there are only some participants but Sara aap akeeli he kafi hain yeh mahfil sajany kay liay ………
Anyhow your subject is very nice Muhabbat …….

**One she’r came in my mind is

Muhabbat Aab Naheen Ho Gi
Yeh Kuch Din Baad Main Hogi
Guzar Jain Gain Jub Yeh Din
Yeh Inn Key Yaad Main Ho Gi**

**And 2nd one came in my mind when one my friend sent me this sha’r when I was khafa with one of my friend to araz kia hay

Muhabatoon Main Khatain To Ho Hey Jati Hain
Muhabatoon Ka Taqaza Hay Dur Guzar Karna**

sara_farooqui · May 15, 2006, 7:23am

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Shukriya Sannan ji,,,,
*hmm acha ab nahi mai aisi batain karon gi,, ab yaqeen aa gaya ke mesey dost to merey sath hain hi na,,, *

oor han topic pe sheir ,, Arz kia hia,,

Na dost yaar, na'seh,, na nama ber na raqeeb
Bala kashane muhabbat se koon razi tha

Sannan · May 15, 2006, 8:00am

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**kia yaad dila diay ....

Woh Meri Pehli Muhabat, Woh Meri Pahli Shikasat
Phir to Paiman-e-wafa So (100) Martaba main nay kia **

being_lonely · May 15, 2006, 8:46am

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Humnay Dil Tora Dharkanoun Kay Khauf Say
Apni Basti He Mita Di Barishoun Kay Khauf Say
**
Kon Kehta Hai Hamein Mohabbat Ras Agaye?****
Hum Tu Youn He Hans Daitay Hain Ansoun Kay Khauf Say**

being_lonely · May 15, 2006, 8:51am

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all last verses from sara n sannan are heart touching keep goin on fight club buddies:) here is again sumthing from me:)

Mohabbat se bhi nafrat ho gai hai
Humein yeh kaisi wehshat ho gai hai
**
Jahan matlab wahan mohabbat miley gi
Tijarat si Mohabbat ho gai hai **

sara_farooqui · May 15, 2006, 9:19am

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Sannan ji,, kia bat hai apki too

Aj kal kis se muhabbat hai tumhain
Aj kal kis ke liye pagal hoo

oor lonly ji,, ab aap ne bhi zada se zada oor achey achey sheir share kerney hain,,,,

Toney socha hai kabhi kitna muhabbat ke bagher
Rooh fersa dile weeran ka nazara hota

being_lonely · May 15, 2006, 9:31am

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Sara

sara_farooqui · May 15, 2006, 9:34am

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Jiiiiiiii

sara_farooqui · May 15, 2006, 9:35am

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Ach mera,,, kal ka contribution bhi le lijiye,,,
kal meri chuti hai,,, pape rhai,, dua kijiye ga,,

Bein kerti hoi ankhain ye preshan zulfein
Oor kia chahtey ho us se muhabbat ker ke

aik oorr

Humnasheen pooch na mujh se ke muhabbat kia hai
Ashk ankhon mai umad atey hain is nam ke sath

being_lonely · May 15, 2006, 9:37am

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*

Dekhnay ka shauq,iss andaaz se barhta gya
dekhtay he dekhaty unn se mohabbat ho gai

Mohabbat pyar ulfat k ma'aani bhool jaaye ga
Zamana rafta rafta har kahani bhool jaaye ga

sara_farooqui · May 15, 2006, 9:42am

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wahh wahh ,, llonly ji,, ap to mushaiyra lout ke le gayee,, kia kehney apke

Sannan · May 16, 2006, 7:03am

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**Hum To bus yahi Kah Saktay Hain …

Mujh Say Aab Meri Muhabat Kay Fasanay Nah Kaho
Mujh Ko Kahnay Do Kah Main Nay Unhain Chaha He Naheen **

Sannan · May 16, 2006, 7:04am

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