oh please .. don’t let me even start on it .. 
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umera ahmad needs a lot of experience to write and have a grip on the reader.
A fiction seems nice if it has been deduced from some ground realities but if its basis are based on some “fantasies” then its not easy to absorb it. Specially, when you are reading it ..
I believe, a good writer is who, who has power in his words which make “reader” imagine whatever is going on in the novel. if he is not able to do it then he needs to polish his skills.
Read this novel .. The Metamorphosis - Wikipedia full of fiction .. .. but the writer has written it so amazingly that during your reading you will actually start beleiving on things.