MeiN tanha kab hooN!

mahamkhan · July 19, 2006, 10:32am

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very very nice....Amal

Shahana · July 21, 2006, 4:45am

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aikaur oodas nazam.
dukh ki koi **laiy **nahi hai
dukh ki koi naiy nahi hai
**naiy ( bansari)
laiy (sur)

**

Amal · July 21, 2006, 12:19pm

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Shahana · July 22, 2006, 7:24am

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Main nay kuch ghalat keh diya?

Beshak main aaj kal bed rest par hoon lekin main chhat aur deewarain dekhnay say tu rahi. Kuch na kuch share karti rehti hoon. Aur unsay bol kay likhwati hoon.

fazeelat · July 22, 2006, 8:38am

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superb

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 27, 2006, 8:11pm

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beautiful

Amal · July 27, 2006, 11:43pm

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Shahana aesi koi baat nahi :)

fazeelat, thanx for liking :)

Nice to see you after a long time HeArT HaCKeR. Hope everything is fine on your side :)

charming_gurl · July 29, 2006, 1:52pm

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bohut khoob janab

Muslim_girl_1 · July 30, 2006, 4:49pm

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very nice...

goodnews · August 11, 2006, 5:10am

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Amal ky klam sy sabit hota hy k Amal Dil rakhty hain jysa ky Hafeez Jalandhri ny frmaya,
Biyany DARD ko Dil chaiy janaby Hafeez
Faqat Zuban yhan,Qabily Khitab nahi!!!
*** :)***

Amal · August 11, 2006, 11:34am

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Bohat shukriya goodnews Sheir acha dhoond kar laey heiN aap :k: Ye to sab likhney waaloN par saadiq aata hey

goodnews · August 11, 2006, 3:35pm

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Shukriya kh kr sharminda mat kijy Amal.Ap pr sheir sadiq aya hy tu ap ky nam kia hy Jnab Amal sahib:)***Go main tu pal do pal ki shair bhi nahi magar *thuri buhat sukhan fehmi sy***Allah ny nawaza hy is nymat pr shukr guzar hon Raby Kainat ki:) ***

Muslim_girl_1 · August 11, 2006, 5:34pm

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very very nice poem Amal.....

goodnews · August 11, 2006, 6:29pm

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**WaALlah, Muqaffa o Mussajja andazy sukhan koi DASH ji sy sikhy.Urdu ka lutf lyna ho to in k quotes parhiy. ***
Guftgu ka woh andaz (style) "gua phool jharty hain."ByMisal Nazm pr by misal tabsra isi ko khty hain:rose: ***

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 11, 2006, 9:32pm

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bohut khoob!

fara · August 16, 2006, 7:35am

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**Hameesha ki terhan dilkash shayerii...

Khush rahain Amal Ji
**

Amal · August 16, 2006, 10:36pm

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goodnews, Muslim girl, ghazal kisi ke and fara, pasandeedgi ke leey be’had shukriya So nice all of you

goodnews · August 18, 2006, 3:44am

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***Wow! Ary Bhooly Bisry khan ho tum. Zra jaldi sy ao; Os din bra ittrra rhy thy ky phol mila hy MOD sy *; dykho hamin bhi phol mil giya aj:balley: Chahy aik aik pati hi group ky hisy main ay gi magar khty hain na “some thing is better then Nothing.” {Is ki Bamuhawra URDU tu koi kr dy please(not word to word)}