long time ke bahd

[hiccup]

Re: long time ke bahd

That begs the question: Can you write at all. So i think ill pass :p

[Mehnaz]

Re: long time ke bahd

@hiccup

It is midnight

I wish. i could shear open
and spead like butter
my heart
across your lips.

so that you could know
and know
and taste

the intensity of each beat

could lick
my wounds

with passion saved entirely for
my breasts

Beautifully captured …

[hiccup]

Re: long time ke bahd

@MehnazQ

Beautifully captured …

thankyou,

i wasnt realyl sure if anyone would understand it. or even if it made sense.

[Aish]

Re: long time ke bahd

lol

[hiccup]

Re: long time ke bahd

you better hush before I post yours up here :p

[sabah]

Re: long time ke bahd

Beauty of free poetry is that you can interpret it as you please.

Really nice hiccup :)

Lekin kuRiye, ba'd meiN 'hey' nahiN hoti :p (title of the thread)

[Azad]

Re: long time ke bahd

hummm

[hiccup]

Re: long time ke bahd

@sabah

Beauty of free poetry is that you can interpret it as you please.

Really nice hiccup

Lekin kuRiye, ba’d meiN ‘hey’ nahiN hoti (title of the thread)

Baji hummai aap ke ghari urdu nahin samaj ai.