Light poetry...

[UZ]

Re: Light poetry…

@ehsan

Wah, Wah, Mukarar.

Iss thread mein hum aaye,
niksik ka kalaam parha
unki shayri per rona ayaa.

naa thaa khuch to shair thaa naa hota khuch to shair hota
Daboya niksik ki poetry ne shairi ko na hota sher to kaya hota

[TLK]

Re: Light poetry...

Bus ji kasr-e-nafsi tu aap per khattam hay...

NikSik ki khidmat main aik adad nazam aur pesh kerti hoon

Niksik aur TLK, dono achay bachay hain aik he ghar main bayhud piyar se rehtay hain Sub jhagray GS per aa ker kertay hain... Aur yaheen aa ker unko nimta'tay hain.. Niksik jis din khanna nahi banati hay TLK jub khanna khannay aati hay (he is khan, so have to refer him like this :D, plus it rhymes well) Niksik usko Cuisine Corner lay jati hay Achay achay threads ko dono perdhtay hain Issi terhan dono ki bhook mit jati hay...

Adaab Arz Hay... i hope TLK wont mind...

TLK wont mind
TLK is kind
TLK sab dekhat hai
he is not blind
sab se achcha, sab se aagay
sab guppy behind

OK I think meri shayeri yaheen khatam ho gayee hai.

[Shazia_Arif]

Re: Light poetry…

bohat telented hain ap…main ap ko fone ker k aik akhbaar ka pata dun gi to us main zarur post kariye ga iss shahkaar ko

[Shazia_Arif]

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@TLK

TLK wont mind
TLK is kind
TLK sab dekhat hai
he is not blind
sab se achcha, sab se aagay
sab guppy behind

OK I think meri shayeri yaheen khatam ho gayee hai.

shukar hai idher he khatam ho gai nai to mere khatam hone main 5 min reh gay thay

[Southie]

Re: Light poetry...

as in halki pulki.

Pesh hai Hinglish Shayree

Aapki Shayree thee ithnee halkee
Udthee chalee gayee, towards Way Milkee

[KKF]

Re: Light poetry...

haiN aur bhii GS pe suKhanwar bahot achchhe
kahte haiN k "Niksik" kaa hai andaaz-e-bayaan aur!

:)

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

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door se dekha Niksik khari thi
** qareeb ja ke dekha Lipstic parri thi **

door se dekha Niksik daant rai thi
qareeb ja ke dekha Muskan ansoo baha rahi thi

[Shazia_Arif]

Re: Light poetry…

@_Masoom_Muskaan

door se dekha Niksik khari thi
** qareeb ja ke dekha Lipstic parri thi **

door se dekha Niksik daant rai thi
qareeb ja ke dekha Muskan ansoo baha rahi thi

ufffffffffffffffffffffff

[ehsan]

Re: Light poetry…

@Southie

Pesh hai Hinglish Shayree

Aapki Shayree thee ithnee halkee
Udthee chalee gayee, towards Way Milkee

[Faixan]

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Ishq mei roney sey aur bey-baaq ho gaye
dhoye gaye hum itney k bs paak ho gaye

[TLK]

Re: Light poetry…

@Shazia_Arif

shukar hai idher he khatam ho gai nai to mere khatam hone main 5 min reh gay thay

shabash. aap kee aajezee dekh ke mogambo khush hu’a

[KKF]

Re: Light poetry…

@_Masoom_Muskaan

door se dekha Niksik khari thi
** qareeb ja ke dekha Lipstic parri thi **

door se dekha Niksik daant rai thi
qareeb ja ke dekha Muskan ansoo baha rahi thi

waah waah…kia zabardast qit’a hai…shabbaash…lagi raho munni begum :omg

[Niksik]

Re: Light poetry...

love it :D

[P_G]

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tum nay Light poetry kaha to aaya mujhay yaad

** ajj LIGHT ayee jaanay kitnay ghan'tooN kay baad**

[Niksik]

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PG Salam, kaisi ho tum?
dikhti nahi aaj kal kahan ho gum?

[P_G]

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nikii ji app ko walikum salaam

ajj kal zindgee guzar rahe hai gumnaam

haal ka kia poochay ho aye dost

jaysai dhaltee hoye dhoop ,or udaas shaam

[Niksik]

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Udaas na ho Allah pey rakh yaqeen
Uska banaiya hua aasman, uski yeh zameen
Himmat na haro behen honsla rakho
Duaa mey bohot asar hai, mazboot hai tumhara deen

[P_G]

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^ app ki baatoon say ayee chehray per muskaaan

hosla hay buland ,himmat bhi jawaan

bus ho jaatay hain kabhi kabhi pareshaan

k apnee zaat main bara he kamzor hai insaaN

[Niksik]

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Waah humari halki phulki poetry aaj kamyaab hui

[P_G]

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^mubarkaaaN : P