Let's talk/Reply in Poetry Way

KKF · April 6, 2012, 4:19pm

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Haal aHvaal poochhne kaa shukria janaab-e-man
bas Dominos meN sale lagi hai so pizza khaayeNge

Guac · April 6, 2012, 4:33pm

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You are so lucky
You get to eat Domino's
Don't be scared
when Guac follows

Meh I tried :o

KKF · April 6, 2012, 4:49pm

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shaa’raana andaaz meN farmaaiye lol

Guac · April 6, 2012, 4:56pm

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My urdu is soo bad…okay let me try

Don’t laugh
but do correct me

Ab mujhe bas hai roona
ku kay nahi aata shaa’raana andaaz meN farmaana

**don’t even know if the last word is real

muqawwee123 · April 6, 2012, 4:58pm

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Great, You are self sufficient in Urdu!

Arz kia hai

Guac ka andaaz hamen bhaa gaya
Jab unko Urdu main shair kehna aa gaya

KKF · April 6, 2012, 4:58pm

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***merii majaal jo haNsuuN?

great…you did a good job…keep trying…btw, welcome to the thread. im impressed! :)***

KKF · April 6, 2012, 5:01pm

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*saddaqna, bilkul bajaa farmaayaa aapne
maiN ne bhii vohii kahaa jo kahaa aapne! *:)

muqawwee123 · April 6, 2012, 5:10pm

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Sahi farmaya aap ne, ab Guac ki bhi kiyun na li jae raye
Magar hain kahan wo, lagta hai jaise koi naya shair hai banae

lethal_kamikaze · April 6, 2012, 7:09pm

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Is thread ko u sb ne 'chaand' laga diyan
gar yaqeen nahi to plz aaina dekh lain :)

muqawwee123 · April 6, 2012, 7:15pm

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Na zarooart pade gi kisi aaine ki
Mehboob ki aankhon main sab nazar ajega

lethal_kamikaze · April 6, 2012, 7:39pm

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Na dekh kisi ke chehray ko haqarat se
Har chehra kisi na kisi shaks ka mehboob hota hy

muqawwee123 · April 6, 2012, 7:45pm

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Apne aala zouq ki daad lejiye
ek like de dia maine wasool kejiye

lethal_kamikaze · April 6, 2012, 7:49pm

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Acha kiya jo ‘like’ kar diya ‘thanks’ ki jaga warna!
Hum dirya dil hain dene mein

muqawwee123 · April 6, 2012, 7:58pm

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LKK bhai aap to Maar dhaar pe aa gae
Tasali rakhiye apna dheeraj kahan chor chhaar ke agae :mirch:

Guac · April 6, 2012, 9:25pm

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I will try again one of these days!

lethal_kamikaze · April 6, 2012, 9:27pm

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Guac ke ‘will try’ kehnay se hum ho gay
Kiya yeh burger ki baat hy ya shair-o-shair ki

Southie · April 7, 2012, 2:16am

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Ik tharf burger, doosri tharaf celery
laye Khan Pizza, dhoonday hum brewery

KKF · April 7, 2012, 2:24am

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Brewery nahiiN janaab, kiuN k
brewery hau “BURI, RE!”, samjhe?

Southie · April 7, 2012, 2:31am

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Brewery buri, pizaa achi
Khaan tanik deejiye, slice with mirchi

KKF · April 7, 2012, 2:42am

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kiuN nahiiN Bhai Southie, milegaa pizza aur milegii pepsi
ham deNge ThanDii Pepsii, pizza ke liye mirch deNge Bhai Mirchi