Lafz ba lafz poetry - September

Koyal · September 13, 2014, 1:51pm

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:k: lo g hum a gaey

muqawwee123 · September 13, 2014, 1:52pm

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ab aisa shair sunaiye jis main chand aata ho.. aur uss shair main koi sa bhi lafz chun ke uss lafz wala shair post karne ko kahen.

muqawwee123 · September 14, 2014, 5:23am

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Sharafat soz tasveeron ki uryani nahin jati,
Adaab ki aar main Targheeb-e-roomani nahin jati...

Uryani

ehsan · September 14, 2014, 6:05am

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hamaare jism kii uriyaanat pey mat hansanaa
**ke tum jo orhe hue ho vo ridaa hamaarii hai

jism**

muqawwee123 · September 14, 2014, 6:22am

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jism ki baat nahin thi, unke dil tak jaana tha,
lambi doori tay karne me waqt to lagta hai

lambi

jumpyb · September 14, 2014, 6:34am

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Chaar dina da payaar ho raabaa
bari lambi judai… ho bari lambi judai..

judai

ehsan · September 14, 2014, 6:34am

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**judaai ho ke milan har adaa hamaarii hai
tumhaaraa shahar hai lekin fizaa hamaarii hai

Fizaa**

muqawwee123 · September 14, 2014, 6:36am

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gaane nahin shair post karne hain

Kya ghazab hai ke us ki khamoshi,
Mujh se baatain hazaar karti hai

Ghazab

ehsan · September 14, 2014, 6:38am

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*Gazab kiyaa, tere vaade pey aitabaar kiyaa *
**tamaam raat qayaamat kaa intezaar kiyaa

qayamat**

muqawwee123 · September 14, 2014, 6:41am

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Nazuk mizaaj aap, qayamat hain Mir-ji.
joon sheesha mere munh na lago, main nashe mein hoon

sheesha

ehsan · September 14, 2014, 6:52am

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sheeshaa toote gul mach jaaye
**dil toote aawaaz na aaye

awaaz**

muqawwee123 · September 14, 2014, 6:59am

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Saamny Manzil Thi Aur Peechay Us Ki Aawaaz,
Rukta To Safar Jata Chalta To Bichar Jata

Manzil

ehsan · September 14, 2014, 7:29am

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*aise chup hain kay yeh manzil bhii karii ho jaise *
**teraa milanaa bhii judaaii ki gharii ho jaise

Judaai **

muqawwee123 · September 14, 2014, 2:28pm

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sayad dil hai dag-e-judai se rashk-e-bag
tujh ko bhi ho nasib ye gulzar dekhna

Gulzaar

ehsan · September 15, 2014, 5:53am

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yaar thaa gulzaar thaa baad-e-sabaa thii main na thaa
**laayaq-e-paa-bos-e-jaaN kyaa hinaa thii main na thaa

Sabaa**

muqawwee123 · September 15, 2014, 10:57am

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Qafas udaas hai yaaro saba se kuchh to kaho.
Kahin to bahr-e-Khuda aaj zikar-e-yaar chale

Qafas

ehsan · September 15, 2014, 12:22pm

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**phir qafas mein shor utthaa qaidiyon kaa aur sayyaad
dekhanaa uraa degaa phir Khabar rihai kee

Khabar
**

muqawwee123 · September 15, 2014, 12:36pm

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Koi ummid bar nahin aati
Koi surat nazar nahin aati.
Aage aati thi haale dil par hasi
Ab kisi baat par nahin aati
Hum Wahan Hain Jahan say Hum Ko Bhi
Kuch Hamari Khabar Nahi Ati

hasi/hansi

ehsan · September 15, 2014, 5:07pm

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Lafz “Khabar” tha.

muqawwee123 · September 15, 2014, 5:10pm

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to issi ghazal main khabar wala shair bhi to hai… ab doobra dekhen aur ‘hansi’ se shair post karen