Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - November 2014

muqawwee123 · November 22, 2014, 8:11pm

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Qadam gin gin ke rakhte hain kamar ball kha hi jati hai.
Khuda Jab Husn Deta Hai, Nazakat Aa Hi Jaati Hai

Kamar

Aceones · November 22, 2014, 8:14pm

Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - November 2014

pehla misra shaid kisi "local-faraz" nay banaya hay
mainay to yun suna hay...

nazaakat naaz-neeno kay bananay say nahi aati
khuda jab husn deta hay nazaakat aahi jati hay

P_G · November 22, 2014, 8:15pm

Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - November 2014

app dono jazba-e-dil istimaal ker rahay hain...

mera lafz jaazb-e-dil hai

ghalat bat....

muqawwee123 · November 22, 2014, 8:15pm

Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - November 2014

per aap ko kamar se hai shair post karna hai ab.

muqawwee123 · November 22, 2014, 8:16pm

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we used jazb e dil

https://rekhta.org/ghazals/jazb-e-dil-jab-ba-ruu-e-kaar-aayaa-fani-badayuni-ghazals

P_G · November 22, 2014, 8:17pm

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apnay shair k mafhoom ko daikhain ..roman urdu k shikaar mat hoon

Aceones · November 22, 2014, 8:19pm

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uth baandh kamar kya darta hay
phir daikh khuda kya karta hay

daikh

muqawwee123 · November 22, 2014, 8:20pm

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aap link main dekhen. jazb e dil select karen to neeche meaning bhi likhi hui aae gi

muqawwee123 · November 22, 2014, 8:21pm

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khol aankh zameen daikh falak daikh
mashriq se ubharte huwe sooraj ko zara dekh

Mashriq

Aceones · November 22, 2014, 8:22pm

Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - November 2014

mohtarma, jazb-e-dil use kiya hay, kashish wala jazb, jazb-e-dil khaainch hi laya unhain meray dar tak!

P_G · November 22, 2014, 8:25pm

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acha jee..baree meharbanii...app khush rahain ..app ko shair mil gaya..

Aceones · November 22, 2014, 8:29pm

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^ is main itna jealous honay ki kya bat hay

P_G · November 22, 2014, 8:34pm

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app ka husan hee aisa ha /...jalna to hay hee

Muhib-E-Shair-E-Mashriq Say Main Nay Yeh Kaha
Kuch To Farmain Huzoor, IQBAL K Ehwal Main
Kehnay Lagay Iqbal Say Itni Si Nisbat Hay Mujhay
Main Nay Banwali Hay Kothi Gulshan-E-Iqbal Main

gulshan-e-iqbal

Aceones · November 22, 2014, 8:35pm

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^ this is cheating, i was going to post this

Aceones · November 22, 2014, 8:36pm

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zara mulk ke raahbaroN ko bulao
ye kooche ye galiyaN ye manzar dikhao
sana-khwan-e-taqdees-e-mashriq ko lao
sana-Khwan-e-taqdees-e-mashriq kahan hain?

taqdees

P_G · November 22, 2014, 8:40pm

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^ kia cheating ? mere shair shair nahi or app ki billi bhi shair hai..kia ap nay muqawwee ko paisay deye hain ?

Aceones · November 22, 2014, 8:42pm

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^ mainay jo shair posta hay wo sahir ludhyanvi ka authentic shair hay, poori nazm hay "sana-khwaan-e-taqdees-e-mashriq" aapkay gulshan-e-iqbal kay to khaliq ka naam bhi nahi maloom.

chalain shabas agla shair postain. taqdees say

P_G · November 22, 2014, 8:48pm

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nahi...mera shair bilkul theek hai.

next word gulshan-e-iqbal hee rahay ga

Aceones · November 22, 2014, 8:51pm

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moderatoraan-e-poetry forum ko lao
moderatoraan-e-poetry-forum kahan hain?

P_G · November 22, 2014, 8:55pm

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gulshan -e-iqbal per khud shair bana lain ..mod to ijazat day rahay hain...naqal kernee koi laazmi shart hay kai..