Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - November 2014

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Qadam gin gin ke rakhte hain kamar ball kha hi jati hai.
Khuda Jab Husn Deta Hai, Nazakat Aa Hi Jaati Hai

Kamar

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Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - November 2014

pehla misra shaid kisi “local-faraz” nay banaya hay
mainay to yun suna hay…

nazaakat naaz-neeno kay bananay say nahi aati
khuda jab husn deta hay nazaakat aahi jati hay

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Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - November 2014

app dono jazba-e-dil istimaal ker rahay hain…

mera lafz jaazb-e-dil hai

ghalat bat…

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:rotfl:

per aap ko kamar se hai shair post karna hai ab.

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we used jazb e dil

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apnay shair k mafhoom ko daikhain ..roman urdu k shikaar mat hoon

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uth baandh kamar kya darta hay
phir daikh khuda kya karta hay

daikh

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aap link main dekhen. jazb e dil select karen to neeche meaning bhi likhi hui aae gi

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Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - November 2014

khol aankh zameen daikh falak daikh
mashriq se ubharte huwe sooraj ko zara dekh

Mashriq

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mohtarma, jazb-e-dil use kiya hay, kashish wala jazb, jazb-e-dil khaainch hi laya unhain meray dar tak!

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acha jee..baree meharbanii…app khush rahain ..app ko shair mil gaya..

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^ is main itna jealous honay ki kya bat hay

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app ka husan hee aisa ha /…jalna to hay hee

Muhib-E-Shair-E-Mashriq Say Main Nay Yeh Kaha
Kuch To Farmain Huzoor, IQBAL K Ehwal Main
Kehnay Lagay Iqbal Say Itni Si Nisbat Hay Mujhay
Main Nay Banwali Hay Kothi Gulshan-E-Iqbal Main

gulshan-e-iqbal

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^ this is cheating, i was going to post this

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zara mulk ke raahbaroN ko bulao
ye kooche ye galiyaN ye manzar dikhao
sana-khwan-e-taqdees-e-mashriq ko lao
sana-Khwan-e-taqdees-e-mashriq kahan hain?

taqdees

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Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - November 2014

^ kia cheating ? mere shair shair nahi or app ki billi bhi shair hai..kia ap nay muqawwee ko paisay deye hain ?

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^ mainay jo shair posta hay wo sahir ludhyanvi ka authentic shair hay, poori nazm hay “sana-khwaan-e-taqdees-e-mashriq” aapkay gulshan-e-iqbal kay to khaliq ka naam bhi nahi maloom.

chalain shabas agla shair postain. taqdees say

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nahi…mera shair bilkul theek hai.

next word gulshan-e-iqbal hee rahay ga

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moderatoraan-e-poetry forum ko lao
moderatoraan-e-poetry-forum kahan hain?

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Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - November 2014

gulshan -e-iqbal per khud shair bana lain ..mod to ijazat day rahay hain…naqal kernee koi laazmi shart hay kai..