KUCH ''dukhi dukhi''

gujmon · February 3, 2006, 8:21am

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wah muslima wah
SOCHA THAA KEH DIL MEIN AIK ZAKHAM HO GA
DEKHA TO RAFU KA BOHAT KAAM NIKLA

muslima_1 · February 3, 2006, 11:36am

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bht khoob
thanks

nia_khan · February 3, 2006, 4:29pm

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:claps:

That was beautiful muslima…

jaan_f - bohot koob

muslima_1 · February 9, 2006, 8:06pm

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^thanks

IS · February 9, 2006, 8:11pm

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paraiay pan ke is wasi-o-areez dunya mai **
**yea ik khushi he bohat hay k dukh apnay hain

muslima_1 · February 9, 2006, 8:15pm

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very effective thanks for sharing bro

shim_thebest · February 9, 2006, 8:20pm

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can me join in too? Kasoor to is daman ka hai jis mein phool bhi gire to kante ban gae.

IS · February 9, 2006, 8:20pm

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Thanks n welcome Sis
but i guess k is shair mai ik mistake hay
bu i m not sure about it coz bohat arsay pehlay yea wala shiar parha tha mai nay farhat abas shah ke book mai say

**paraiay pan ke is wasi-o-areez dunya mai **
yea ik khushi he bohat hay k dard apna hay

muslima_1 · February 9, 2006, 8:27pm

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of course u can join in shim gs insn't my property u know if ur askin me?

if u think ders a mistake init in that case uv changed it very nicely

IS · February 9, 2006, 8:34pm

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Koon say dukh ke baat karien
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*tum to bas aik he dukh pochtay hoo
koon say dukh ke karien baat zara yea to bata
mosamoon, sarad hawaoon ke mesahi ka dukh
rah ke dhool main bikhri hoie binaiee ka dukh
sung kay shaihar main khud dukh say shanasaiee ka dukh
ya kesi bhigti barsaat mein tanhaiee ka dukh
koon say dukh ke karien baat kay dil ka darya
itn tugyani ke zad par hay kay kuch yaad nahi
kab hamien bhoool gia koon say harjaiee ka dukh
tum to bas ik he dukh pochtay hoo *

frontier_charm · February 10, 2006, 7:13am

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Jaan_f you’ve composed some really beautiful works.
these are so beautifully expressed: #6,7, 10, 11, 12:teary3:

muslima_1 · February 11, 2006, 10:17pm

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very very nice thanks

system · February 12, 2006, 3:18am

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dukh tou itna hai kay
ansouN nikaltay bund nahee houtay
piyaar bhi itna hai kay
dua kartay yeh labb bund nahee houtay

:(

jaan_f · February 16, 2006, 10:18pm

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hey thats nice bt y that sad.........

Noor_gr8 · February 17, 2006, 7:05am

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2nd one is so kool niz one