Koi Benaam si Wehshat...

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Re: Koi Benaam si Wehshat...

Thanks for reading it UZ.

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beautiful gazal..............thanks for sharing fara

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Thanks Fiz.

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i start readin this nazm y'day bt it seems tht i ve'nt finished yet pata nahe me is nazm me utar gaya ya ye mujh me bt i am completly in trans of ths shahkaar bht he shaandar nazm ha fara thanks 4 sharin

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Beautiful.

Sorry to be anal here but are you sure that you copied it right. The flow majorly interrupts right here

Koi Chehra,Koi Paikar Mujhey Acha Nahi Lagta
Nihayat Dilruba, Behad Hasee'n, Rangeen Qurbat Bhe
Mujhe Be-Kaif Kerti Hai
Mujhe Apni Pasandeeda Se Sorat Bhe
Pheeki Pheeki Lagti Hai

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Re: Koi Benaam si Wehshat...

Thanks DS and TLK.

I do admit that the poem lacks flow in this line particularly, but that is how I found it...