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hey kia neend thi jis ke liye betaab thi aankh
aur uthee he sirf khuwab-e pareshaan le kar
Correction: (Faqat)
Hey kia neend thi jis ke liye betaab thi aankh
aur uthee he Faqat khuwab-e pareshaan lay kar
Kaleem Kazmi
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thanks kaleem ji me iss rahh pe bilkul anaree hoon ap ka saath rahee ga to me ghabraoonga nahi
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Ek Bewafa Sey Aik Mulaqat Bohat Hai
Jitna Diya Humnay Tera Saath Bohat Hai
Duniya Ko Dil Ke Daagh Dikhaon To Kis Tarah
Aye Zindagi Yeh Raaz Chupaon To Kis Tarah
Apni Tabahiyoon Mein Mera Haath Bohat Hai
Jitna Bhee Diya Humnay Tera Saath Bohat Hai
Marnay Ke Liye Dard Ki Raat Bohat Hai
Jitna Bhee Diya Humnay Tera Saath Bohat Hai
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*Guzray Huay Taweel Zamanay Kay Baad Bhi *
Dil Main Raha Woh Choor Kay Janay Kay Baad Bhi **
*Pehlu Main Reh Kay Dil Nay Dia Hai Bohat Faraib *
**Rakha Hai Us Ko Yaad Bhulanay Kay Baad Bhi
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**Tu ek waqat tha jisko bhula diya maine
Har ek yaad ka Gulshan jala diya maine
Wo pyar jiske kaside kyee likhe they kabhi
Kitab-e-Dil se wo unwaan mita diya maine
Bhattakk raha tha main rahon main jis Mohabat ki
Unhein Mazaar ka Manzar bana diya maine
Na tumse koi gila hai na ab shikayat hai
Tumhari raah se khudko hata diya maine
Nazar mila ke jo dekho ge jaan jaao ge
Ke kaise tum ko Nazar se gira diya maine**
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Ay dil tu muhabbat karta kyun hai
Jo karta hai tu phir tarapta kyun hai
Jo beth gaya hai dil main pyar ka dard banke
Wo aankhon ke raste nikalta kyun hai
Main tere saath hun har raah mein mujhse kehta tha wo
Tu phir aaj yeh rasta mujhe sunsaan lagta kyun hai
Main dharkan hon uske dil ki vo kehta tha mujhse
Phir aaj uska dil mere bina dharkta kyun hai
Wo mera nahi hai yeh janti hun main phir bhi
Kisi aur ke saath dekh ke usko dil machalta kyun hai
Ye dil bhi ajeeb hota hai doston
Kabhi kehta hai ja tham le uske haathon ko
Phir reh reh ke sambalta kyun hai.
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khush raho bachay bohat acha collection hai tumhara !!
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dua dil se dee he na.........?
hahahahahaha
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BAAT AISI HO KI JAZBAT KAM NA HO.... **
*KHAYALAT AESE HO, KI KABHI GAM NA HO.... *
*DIL K KONEY ME ITNI SI JAGAH RAKHNA.... *
**KI KHALI KHALI SA LAGE, JAB HUM NA HO....
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Ya tera tazkira kery hir shakhs.....
Ya koi hum se ghuftegoo na kery.....
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*
koi mohabbat main juda ho ker bach nahin sekta
jo bach gaya usay tanhai mar daley ge
**
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hum ko juda na kar de yeh ik farq zara sa ,
to fasloon ka kail main kurbaatoon ka pyasa
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elegant choice .................. thanks dear
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very nice & lovely sharings........thnx...!
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Tu bicher gaya to teri kami ka ehsas hoa
Khushi to rooth gai gham ka ehsaas hoa
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Tu nahin to teera shabi ka ehsaas hoa
Itni mohabbat bhi kia key pagal hi ho gayay
Kaun karta hey itni deewangi ehsaas hoa
Raat ko rotey hein teri yad mein shayed
Damen mein hey ashkon ki nami ehsaas hoa
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bichahrd ke tujh se daikha na geya kisi ka mailaap
urdaa diyee hain humne parindey shajar pe baithey huwe
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[quote=jonaid]
ye aur baat he ke dil pe qyamat guzar gey
lekin shikastt kha kar bara hosla mila
[quote=lutfullah urf Abdullateef]
Bhai Junaid! Buzurg shaairon ke kahe hue sher quote karke waah waahi lootne ki aarzoo hai to kam az kam un sheron ko sahi tarah naqal to karo!
Aise achhe sher ki gardan maar kar tumko kya mila? Asal sher yun tha:-
"Yeh aur baat dil pe qayamat guzar gayi!
** Lekin shikast khaa ke bara hausla milaa!"**
Tum ne mere bhai pahle misre ko utaarte hue yeh bhi naheen mahsoos kiya keh uska wazan doosre misre se ziada hai? Aakhir tum kisi achhe shaair ke sher utaar kar yahan pesh kar rahe ho! Kisi raah chalte be shaoor lafange ki tukbandi to naheen?
Umeed hai abse sher naqal karte waqt ehtiyaat rakhoge!:)
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nice
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[quote=jonaid]
ye aur baat he ke dil pe qyamat guzar gey lekin shikastt kha kar bara hosla mila
[quote=lutfullah urf Abdullateef]
Bhai Junaid! Buzurg shaairon ke kahe hue sher quote karke waah waahi lootne ki aarzoo hai to kam az kam un sheron ko sahi tarah naqal to karo! Aise achhe sher ki gardan maar kar tumko kya mila? Asal sher yun tha:- "Yeh aur baat dil pe qayamat guzar gayi! Lekin shikast khaa ke bara hausla milaa!" Tum ne mere bhai pahle misre ko utaarte hue yeh bhi naheen mahsoos kiya keh uska wazan doosre misre se ziada hai? Aakhir tum kisi achhe shaair ke sher utaar kar yahan pesh kar rahe ho! Kisi raah chalte be shaoor lafange ki tukbandi to naheen? Umeed hai abse sher naqal karte waqt ehtiyaat rakhoge!:)
salam......!!!!!!
hairat hui aap ki baat parhh ke aur hansee bhee aii hairat is liyee hui he ye mere apne shair nahi hain me isii topic me bata chuka hoon agar aap sab msg parhey gain to aap ko khud nazar ajaeega hansee is liyee aii ke ke aap wazan ki baat kar rahee hain jin topic pe ye shair likhen huwe hain wahan kis kanbakhtt ko wazann yaad rehta he
aur ik baat kahoonga aap ko shyad aap ko hairat ho ye sunn kar ke meen urdu ghar me seekhi he matlab ye meri zuban nahi he ami ki zidd thi to aaj main urdu bol sakta hoon likh sakta hoon
ab akhir me aap ka thanks kahoonga ke aap ne meri urdu ko behtar kia
apna kheyal rakhiyee ga plz.