kabhi qaa'filay meRi aa's k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa'ey

[Koyal]

Re: kabhi qaa’filay meRi aa’s k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa’ey

@HeArT HaCKeR

GS ki shaakh pe bethne ka socha tha lekin ye boht kamzor ho gaye hai

is k neechay lohay k pilar laga dain na mazboot ho jaiey ghi

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

Re: kabhi qaa’filay meRi aa’s k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa’ey

@Koyal

maiN girha maiN baand k haadsaat niqal paRi teri khooj maiN

kahiN taaR-kool ki thei saRak jahaN aa’g ban-ti dhoop thei
kabhi kachi rah ki dhool maiN jahaN saans laiNa muhaal tha
sar-r-rizm jaaN kabhi dil k daRd se haar kar
kabi raat raat basar duaa’ooN maiN ho gaa’ee
kabhi qaa’filay meRi aa’s k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa’ey
meRa pairhaN tha phata huwa kahiN gard gard aata huwa
maiN adhooray-puN k saRaab maiN
tujhay dhoondhti phiri dar-badaR
kisi ajnabi dayyaar maiN
koi dukh mila kisi moRe pe koi gham mila kisi choak maiN
kisi rah-guzar k sakoot maiN koi daRd a k daRa gay’aa
kabhi chal paRi kabi ruk gaa’ee kisi kashmakash k gubaar maiN
mujhay kia mila teray payaaR maiN
maiN girah maiN baand k haadsaat

kahiN gum huwi teRi khooj maiN

this is called ‘masterpiece’. bohut arsay baad kese nay itne lajwab nazam post ke hai thanx a lot for sharing i’m gona save it ..

[HAMMAD]

Re: kabhi qaa’filay meRi aa’s k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa’ey

bhooootaacheee hiamay nay parhe hee nahi hia
salam
aH

[HAMMAD]

Re: kabhi qaa’filay meRi aa’s k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa’ey

koyal aor etc memebrs ap sab say ek question hia
yee poem may gaame he gaam kion hota hia
koi asye poem plzz post kareen naa jiss may khushee bhi ho
like iqbal
justodo ke asye koi share
i ever read peoms thread sab may gaam he gaame hota hia
GS urff my dar moods now from today u roozana post ache se poem jiss may gam nahi ho

[WiseGuy]

Re: kabhi qaa'filay meRi aa's k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa'ey

Nice

[Koyal]

Re: kabhi qaa’filay meRi aa’s k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa’ey

@HAMMAD

koyal aor etc memebrs ap sab say ek question hia
yee poem may gaame he gaam kion hota hia
koi asye poem plzz post kareen naa jiss may khushee bhi ho
like iqbal
justodo ke asye koi share
i ever read peoms thread sab may gaam he gaame hota hia
GS urff my dar moods now from today u roozana post ache se poem jiss may gam nahi ho

gham k bina poetry achi nahi lagti hamaad..

[Koyal]

Re: kabhi qaa’filay meRi aa’s k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa’ey

@WiseGuy

Nice

hmmmmmm acha

[Azad]

Re: kabhi qaa’filay meRi aa’s k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa’ey

@Koyal

shaied zaida karam hota agar koyal prosan hoti:rolleyes:

nahi bhaii humaray soyam ke chawal aap ke naseeb main nahi

[Koyal]

Re: kabhi qaa’filay meRi aa’s k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa’ey

@Azad

nahi bhaii humaray soyam ke chawal aap ke naseeb main nahi

ap ko bara shoq hai ye soem doem ka pahlay spelling tu seekh lo

[Azad]

Re: kabhi qaa'filay meRi aa's k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa'ey

lain jee ... inn ki sunain .... Bhai soy'm main itni pyari pyari larkiyan ati hain .. ke buss .. sigh

[homer_j_simpson]

Re: kabhi qaa'filay meRi aa's k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa'ey

:)

[Amal]

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@Koyal

kabhi qaa’filay meRi aa’s k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa’ey
meRa pairhaN tha phata huwa kahiN gard gard aata huwa
maiN adhooray-puN k saRaab maiN
tujhay dhoondhti phiri dar-badaR
kisi ajnabi dayyaar maiN
koi dukh mila kisi moRe pe koi gham mila kisi choak maiN
kisi rah-guzar k sakoot maiN koi daRd a k daRa gay’aa
kabhi chal paRi kabi ruk gaa’ee kisi kashmakash k gubaar maiN
mujhay kia mila teray payaaR maiN
maiN girah maiN baand k haadsaat
kahiN gum huwi teRi khooj maiN

That’s a beauty Koyal:k:…zabardast nazm hey…hamaarey saath share karney ke leeye bohat shukriya

[Koyal]

Re: kabhi qaa’filay meRi aa’s k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa’ey

@Amal

That’s a beauty Koyal:k:…zabardast nazm hey…hamaarey saath share karney ke leeye bohat shukriya

thanks Amal ap ko is beauty ko b dekhnay ki fursat mili:D

[system]

Re: kabhi qaa’filay meRi aa’s k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa’ey

@Koyal

@Koyal

Haye Allah…! Koyal sharmaati bhi hai… Ek dafa sharma key jee nahiN bhara jo dobara sharmana paRra?

[Koyal]

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@KhamoshNigahein

Haye Allah…! Koyal sharmaati bhi hai… Ek dafa sharma key jee nahiN bhara jo dobara sharmana paRra?

hmmmmm:blush:

[ullujii]

Re: kabhi qaa’filay meRi aa’s k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa’ey

@Koyal

[maddi]

Re: kabhi qaa'filay meRi aa's k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa'ey

its really nice nazm and i love it.thx 4 sharing.

[Koyal]

Re: kabhi qaa’filay meRi aa’s k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa’ey

@ullujii

[Koyal]

Re: kabhi qaa’filay meRi aa’s k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa’ey

@maddi

its really nice nazm and i love it.thx 4 sharing.

thanks maddi:)

[ullujii]

Re: kabhi qaa’filay meRi aa’s k kisi dasht-e-yaas maiN kho gaa’ey

@Koyal

JazakALLAH. ap co tobah tobah beh karna atta hai ?