Kabhi kabhi bas yonhi

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Re: Kabhi kabhi bas yonhi

mil jatay to kya hota :hinna:

beautifullll INoo paye :k:

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Re: Kabhi kabhi bas yonhi

very good work Imran bhai

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Re: Kabhi kabhi bas yonhi

hmm nice :)

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nice :@:

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main nai bataoon ga :naraz:

atleast jo kuch aaj kal ho raha hay/ho chuka hay wo na hota :hinna:

thanks sis

Thanks sis

Thanks bro

thanks

~*~ Tagged - Eshal Raza ~*~
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Re: Kabhi kabhi bas yonhi

good narrative.
as a poet, ask your protagonist, who does he know got hisself in to this?
did you send this where you were sending it to?
facing one's limitations and doing
all about them, is the only way to make sure that you dont end up with a sense of ever lasting regrets, dont pre judge anyone, and see what have you done, that has caused unpleasant ness.

as you have written, if this is what you know is true and how you were feeling spontaneously and it has happened to you again and again, then maybe, you need to sift through and see where you are caught up.
and face it, to try harder and perhaps you will achieve what you
wish for, now.

best,
Dushwari

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Re: Kabhi kabhi bas yonhi

infact i dont want to send anywhere just took my fone and start typing nothing specific in my mind
thnx for the some nice words

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so nice .. :)

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^ thanks :-)

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Bohat khoob :)

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im sad ..
im sad ..
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^ thanks :-)

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itna soocha k saal guzar gaya :p
V nice sharing :)

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^ nai saal se bhi zaida :p

Thanks :-)

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muge moskel words ka metleb to bataia nehe tah :naraz:

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Re: Kabhi kabhi bas yonhi

Yani paper out kar dain

hain naa…

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Re: Kabhi kabhi bas yonhi

is main mushkil lafz hain kon se :hoonh:

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buhut khoob.........but na ummedi kion....le aaingy bazar se ja kar dil-o-jaan aur.....

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:lajawab:

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Thanks Sis :slight_smile:
kaya bazar se sb kuch mil jata hay :hoonh:

ye garhe murde kyo ukhaarh diye u ne :smack:

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Re: Kabhi kabhi bas yonhi

IS Dear... Read ur Signature from Gul Khan... :)

Na Umeedi choRo yar... Try Try again... Tumhari NafrataiN.. MuhabatooN maiN Change jo jayengeen :)