Re: Re: kab taak hum apnaY un-kahaY lufzooN ki kirch’aN
dair lagi anay main shuker hai ap aiey tu
wesay hum thora ghabraiey tu..
thanks..
Re: kab taak hum apnaY un-kahaY lufzooN ki kirch'aN
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*Originally posted by Paglee: *
us raat toot-teY huweY taaRooN ki ghoonj maiN
hum kitNi daiR chalteY rahaY kuch pata nahi
kab taak hum apnaY un-kahaY lufzooN ki kirch'aN
faRsh-e-hawa se chunteY rahaY kuch pata nahi
shabnaum k sath sath jo chamkaY tumaam shab
taRay theY wo k akaas meraY ansoo'N k theY
keoN quRbatoN k shoR maiN ghutnay laga tha dum
kismat k theY k halqaY teRay bazo'oN k thay
kuch pata nahi!
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waah kiyaa khoobsuurat nzam hai
alfaaz hi nahee mil rahay iss nazm ki midah saraee k liyay,
kab taak hum apnaY un-kahaY lufzooN ki kirchi-aN
faRsh-e-hawa se chunteY rahaY kuch pata nahi
kiyaa andaaz hai naya naya saa ujlaa ujlaa saa muktaliff saa !!!
un-kahay lafzoN ki kirchiyaaN aur farsh e hawaa
bohat umdaa
shukriyaa aap ka yeah shah-paara hum tak pahonchanay k liyay.
sham
nice :k:
kab taak hum apnaY un-kahaY lufzooN ki kirch'aN
faRsh-e-hawa se chunteY rahaY kuch pata nahi
sigh
It's a beautiful nazm.
The stuff shared doesnt’ proved that you are Paglee 
good one :k: