k meray phool se jo lafZ they wo raakh buN gaa'ey thay

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*Originally posted by Koyal: *

:)
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Koyal Ji,

Soon I will post my comments on your ghazal.

Saqi

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*Originally posted by show_sha: *
good oye! bahut acchay
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shukria..:)

thanks Ary..:slight_smile:

hmmmm why Amal beatiful why not koyal :snooty:

PS: thanks

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*Originally posted by Saqi_the_angel: *

Koyal Ji,

Soon I will post my comments on your ghazal.

Saqi
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how soon saqi..:D

Nice :flower1:

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*Originally posted by Koyal: *

how soon saqi..:D
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Aaj shaam ko cos 2 much 2 do at work so can't reply right now.

Bohot khoob sis:k:

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*Originally posted by Koyal: *

:(
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nahi hai?? :~(

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*Originally posted by Koyal: *

how soon saqi..:D
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Koyal Ji,

Paish-e-Khidmat hai:

mujhako maaraa hai har ek dard-o-davaa se pahale

mujhako maaraa hai har ek dard-o-davaa se pahale
dii sazaa ishq ne har jurm-o-Khataa se pahale

aatish-e-ishq bha.Dakatii hai havaa se pahale
ho.NTh jalate hai.n muhabbat me.n duaa se pahale

ab kamii kyaa hai tere be-sar-o-saamaano.n ko
kuchh na thaa terii qasam, tark-o-fanaa se pahale

ishq-e-bebaak ko daave the bahut Khalavat me.n
kho diyaa saaraa bharam sharm-o-hayaa se pahale

maut ke naam se Darate the ham, ai shauq-e-hayaat
tuune to maar hii Daalaa thaa qazaa se pahale

ham u.nhe.n paake "Firaq" aur bhii kuchh khoye gaye
ye takalluf to na the ahad-e-vafaa se pahale

toota dil kio binaea hae:(

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Originally posted by *Masoom Muskaan: *
toota dil kio binaea hae:(
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KISI ne tora hia is leay :(

Us kambakhat ka sawa satiyanaas!!!:kaboom:

Koyal us ko police muqabalay main marin gaye :kaboom: :kaboom: :kaboom:

:rolleyes: :rolleyes:

tabieat theek hai na ap ki ..:slight_smile:

NahiN, I am not well today. Off sick from wrk.

Saqi

Damn man...uss kaa satiya naas hoo jis nay amal kaa dil tooraa....:(