Ik or shair.....

[WiseGuy]

Re: Ik or shair…

*Originally posted by Swera: *
Hum nay qasam khai hay teray bin na jeeny ki
magar janatin hain ya qasam bhi toot jay gi!

By Subha

:k:
Nice shair Subha ji…

Qasam tu hum bhi nibhaatay magar
kia khabar thee Zalim rooth jaye gee

[WiseGuy]

Re: Re: Ik or shair…

*Originally posted by Koyal: *

ap jantey ho k ye kasam toot jaiey ghi
magar ye ALFI kis din kaam aiey ghi

mazak k part beautiful sher subha keep it up ..

ALFI say qasmo ko joRna choR do
yeh aap kay kisi kaam na aaye gee

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

*Originally posted by Swera: *

keep smiling sis:hug:

[XChorniX]

nice :)

[Swera]

Re: Re: Ik or shair…

*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

:k:
Nice shair Subha ji…

Qasam tu hum bhi nibhaatay magar
kia khabar thee Zalim rooth jaye gee

Thanks WiseGuy..

BaRty qadmoon ko jo rook latain ahin
Kosty wo phir apni qismat ko ahin!

[Swera]

Re: Re: Re: Ik or shair…

*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

ALFI say qasmo ko joRna choR do
yeh aap kay kisi kaam na aaye gee

So it wash Alfi ,which i couldn’t understood!

[Swera]

*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *

keep smiling sis:hug:

Thanks sis
See when u put this----> :k:
That’s y I ----->

Means-------> Thanks..

[Swera]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by XChorniX: *
nice :)
[/QUOTE]

Thanks.