Aliyish
December 18, 2007, 3:31am
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Re: I think I made a fool of myself
gharraara ? Eid hai kay anu bahi ki shadi
thatz waz ma point . Un kay ghar bivi tu hosakthe hai , maaH behan nahe , warna kisi ki maah behan pay awaz kassânay say phelay ap ko ek baar apni behan ka khyal be atah jo roz bahar nikaltee hai !
AQ
December 18, 2007, 3:31am
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ghazal yaa Nazm?
Samad
December 18, 2007, 3:31am
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adreesa muje hukam karo, tumharay aik kehnay par harry potter ko dubara zinda kar doon.
Samad
December 18, 2007, 3:32am
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gharraara ? Eid hai kay anu bahi ki shadi :)
thatz waz ma point . Un kay ghar bivi tu hosakthe hai , maaH behan nahe , warna kisi ki maah behan pay awaz kass'nay say phelay ap ko ek baar apni behan ka khyal be atah jo roz bahar nikaltee hai !
well said yaar! exactlty! yaar ajkal bari achi suchal batain kar rahe ho, bach kay rehna kahi kissi jalsay mai goli na lag jaye.
Re: I think I made a fool of myself
Kuch bhi samajh lo
Main tau gharara pehnoon gi
Re: I think I made a fool of myself
ghazal yaa Nazm?
Ghazal, aaj kal shairi kay mood main hoon.
Waisay koi achaa sa urdu ka afsana bhi chalay ga :)
AQ
December 18, 2007, 3:35am
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Waisay koi achaa sa urdu ka afsana bhi chalay ga :)
Manto yaa Asmat Chughtaai :D???
Re: I think I made a fool of myself
Manto Ive tried to read, He has no wazan in his likhaai, his stories range from one extreme to another.
Chuhtaai ko kabhi naheen para, Chughtaai hi sahee
Aliyish
December 18, 2007, 3:38am
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Asmat ka afsana â Garam lehaaf â yea manto ka afsana â kali shalwarâ
Nahii tum chori dar payjama phaynoo , anarkali cut , takay hum tum ko dewaroon mein chunwa dain KAneez .
aray koi appnna hee maray gaa in Goroon mein kahan daam hai
AQ
December 18, 2007, 3:38am
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Soch lo..
agar kaho tau Sufi Tabbassum kee nazmaiN aur Munshi Prem Chand kee kahaaniyaaN bhee mojood haiN:faizy:
Aliyish
December 18, 2007, 3:39am
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U should read his â Toba taek singhâ . Creation of the century i call it !
AQ
December 18, 2007, 3:40am
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KuR kuR dee ainak deeâŚ
Re: I think I made a fool of myself
Asmat ka afsana â Garam lehaaf â yea manto ka afsana â kali shalwarâ
Nahii tum chori dar payjama phaynoo , anarkali cut , takay hum tum ko dewaroon mein chunwa dain KAneez .
Yeah kaisa bayhooda afsana hay
Im wearing Gharara, tum jo marzi kar lo
Re: I think I made a fool of myself
Is main itni hansi kis baat ki
AQ
December 18, 2007, 4:08am
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iss liye kaY I know you like TOT Batotâs Poems too
Aliyish
December 18, 2007, 4:08am
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well they are classic of urdu afsana.negari , Jahiil ardo babe !
phayhan'loo , ekk pic post karna , i didnt laugh from last few days :) so it might work out !
Samad
December 18, 2007, 4:11am
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Aliyish yaar Peer Baba ji kidar haiN? wo forums par na hoN, to threads ko tharki touch nahi milta.
Re: I think I made a fool of myself
Whats wrong with Tot Batot?
He was a classic
well they are classic of urdu afsana.negari , Jahiil ardo babe !
phayhanâloo , ekk pic post karna , i didnt laugh from last few days so it might work out !
jal kukray, tum jal rahay ho kay tum eid par gharara naheen pehan rahay
AQ
December 18, 2007, 4:12am
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what was that?
Aik thaa laRkaa ToT baToT
naam thaa usskaa meer salot (something like that?)
peetaa thaa woh soda water
khaataa thaa baadaam akhroT
Re: I think I made a fool of myself
Okay you might find it funny
But think how hard the author would have found finding words rhyming with âBatotâ
Classic I tell ya, way better than
Aik thi achi chirya piyarii
Dana dugti thi baychari