I Miss U.................

tum_bin_1 · September 28, 2007, 5:50pm

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Kool :k:
Very Nice

SJ · September 29, 2007, 2:41pm

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chalain app he koi word dain mujhay "miss"kio replace karnay k liay:faizy:

Prince_Ali · September 30, 2007, 4:36am

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bohut khub soniaa jee! great effort :k:

Ali_2 · September 30, 2007, 3:56pm

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Agreed

PS nice poem though

AQ · September 30, 2007, 6:46pm

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soniaa_jee: I liked the bay saakhta punn in the poetry and the fact that it ryhmes very perfectly… I, however, have to agree with Amal… Remixing only makes such poetry for “SMS” type things

I would rather see word “yaad” instead of “miss” IFF I want to put it in the circle of proper urdu poetry… just my opinion.

tweetybird · October 16, 2007, 9:47pm

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soniaa_jee is waqt mujhe yeh per kar mujhe kisi ki bohat ziyada yaad aa rahi hai

SJ · October 17, 2007, 8:43am

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:)
acha.............chalo phir jis ki yaad aa rahee hai ...........ussay yaad karo

_Masoom_Muskaan · October 17, 2007, 9:09am

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don’t miss me

SJ · October 17, 2007, 9:11am

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wel i cant help it!!!:(

_Masoom_Muskaan · October 17, 2007, 9:14am

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koe bat nehe hota he kebhe kebhe

SJ · October 17, 2007, 9:18am

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hmmm…
acha chalo…its ok!!!

being_lonely · October 18, 2007, 2:53am

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Kisay Miss Kar Rahi Hain Itna Zyada tello tello
Ps Nice one

Azad · October 18, 2007, 3:10am

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hummm

SJ · October 18, 2007, 7:22am

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wel Beingo Miss kisi aisay shaks ko kiya jataa hai jo bohat Aziz ho:)

SJ · October 18, 2007, 7:23am

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:aq: