Re: Hi. This is new. Please, welcome …
This is a sher of my teacher Hasan Akbar Kamal
kiyaa hotaa hai khizaaN bahaar kaY aanaY jaanaY saY:shoaby:
Sub mosam haiN, dil khilnaY aur dil murjhaanaY saY 
and this is my sher just came in, in the same rythm:)
"kiyaa huvaa jo ik phool shaakh say tootaa hai:aq:
aur kitnaY gul khilaY haiN, iss shaam kaY aanaY saY" 