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^ ooh yani shagrd Khala ke shagirdge kai lia Nani ChupKeSe ko bhi mithae dena ho ge. :bummer:

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likhou tou aisa likho k qalam ronay par majboor ho jaye
duniya may aisey rahou k marnay k badd duniya bhi mar jaye :bummer:

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haan to aur kya :hehe:

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:frowning:

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satya nass:smash:

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hehehehehe y isnt it goood :D

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acha bachon, uncle is out now, wo aa gae he. :blush:

:wave: AH

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har lafz mai aisa dard paida karo k ghazal marham malnay pe majboor ho jaye:(

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AH uncle

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tum kyun sabko udaas karne pe tulay way ho! :rolleyes:

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har lafz mai aisa dard paida karo k ghazal marham malnay pe majboor ho jaye
apni aashqi mai aisi shiddat paidah karou keh WOH tumhay milnay par majborr ho jaye!

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wah EmM wah subhanALLAH kia baat ki hai, tumharay hath ganday na hotay tou mai choom leta:p

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woh ganday na bhi hon to tum choom lo :hoonh:

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dafa dooor!!

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main sachaayi beyaan kar rahi thiiiiiiii..main kyun dafa hoon!!! :snooty:!

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meray haath zaroor plaeet karwanay hain!! :bummer:

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lakin 3rd line tum kha hi gyi, aur 3 line ka shair nahi hota

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kounsi teesri line?

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likhou tou aisa likho k qalam ronay par majboor ho jaye
paseena na sahee par khoon nikalnay par majboor ho jaye :D
har lafz mai aisa dard paida karo k ghazal marham malnay pe majboor ho jaye
apni aashqi mai aisi shiddat paidah karou keh WOH tumhay milnay par majborr ho jaye

hows that ?

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2nd line doeznt make sense saray shair ka wazan halka ho jata hai