Thanks for the lovely sher...this hope you both will like it...
rahegaa saath teraa pyaar zi.ndagii banakar
ye aur baat merii zi.ndagii vafaa na kare
dil dilseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Wah wah wah wah
Vo kyaa ajeeb dost tha ke jis ke pyaar par
jab aitebaar barr gaya to ikhtiyaar ghat gaya
Shabnam
[This message has been edited by Shabnam (edited March 19, 1999).]
bohat acha sher hai...
maanaa jiivan me.n aurat ek baar mohabbat karatii hai
lekin mujhako ye to bataa de kyaa tuu aurat zaat nahii.n
another one for both of you......
jab bhii aataa hai meraa naam tere naam ke saath
jaane kyuu.N log mere naam se jal jaate hai.n
Nice very very nice indeed
I don't know if I understood the first one though.Could you elaborate if possible
Shabnam
well let me give you the whole sher..you will understand the meaning...
tum puuchho aur mai.n na bataauu.N aise to haalaat nahii.n
ek zaraa saa dil TuuTaa hai aur to ko_ii baat nahii.n
kis ko Khabar thii sa.Nvale baadal bin barase u.D jaate hai.n
saavan aayaa lekin apanii qismat me.n barasaat nahii.n
maanaa jiivan me.n aurat ek baar mohabbat karatii hai
lekin mujhako ye to bataa de kyaa tuu aurat zaat nahii.n
Khatm huaa meraa afasaanaa ab ye aa.Nsuu po.Nchh bhii lo
jis me.n ko_ii taaraa chamake aaj kii raat vo raat nahii.n
Yeh vaqai bohat khubsoorat sher tha. I don't know why but I always find the most depressing shers most beautiful and even though they make you think and maybe even depress you more their beauty cannot be denied
Bohat Khoob Dilse jee. Ab aap ye bataaein ke aap ne apna naam dilse kyoon rakha. Film kuch zyaada achi lag gayee thee kya
Khuda Hafiz
Shabnam
Dil dilseeeee..I dont know why I kept this name..laikin jo kuch bhe main kaiyta hoon,,wo mere dil ka awaz se nikalti hai....
dil to akhir dil hai...
Goog morning to Dilse and Good After noon to Shabnam:
How you two are doing?
what are the weekend plans?
Shabnam Jee yes I would like to be called Saqib
Dilse: that is nice name
You know why
"Dilse jo baat nakaltee hay asar rakhatee hay"
Here are some Dukhee shair for both of you, I heard this morning
"Din guzaray gaa mairay payaar say buch kar kab tak
Dekhana hay wo na aaiy gaa mairey ghar kab tak
ik ik boond sharaaray kee tharah lagatee hay
aaag barsaiy gaaa barsaat kaa manzar kab tak
an other one
"mairay jo haath main rekha hay, akailee hoo gee
jiss main too ho gaa wo koee aor hathailee hoo gee"
dal ma kala...aurat..mard..????(question mark)and garbar hai ... in sab batoon se ap...why do you get little bit hyper..parashan..worried...etc any reason...
naa jaane kis adaa se liya toone mera naam
duniya samaJh rahee hai ke sab kuCh tera hooN maiN
le mere tajurboN se sabaK ae mere raqeeB
do chaar saal umR meiN tuJhse baDa hooN maiN
lol
Dilse
Do I really get hyper..parashan..worried?
I don't know Yaaar why?
But there is some thing Daal main Kaala.....
Right?
So what would be the first lesson I could learn from your "tajurboN se sabaK"
Dilse jee Parayshaani ke mutaaliq main aap kis se mukhatib thay mujhse yaa phir saqib jee se?
Again both of you nice shers
Weekend plans for me are spending all day tommorow at a friends reunion a good old gossip session and loads of catching up. Sunday is my niece's 2nd b-day
What does lol stand for . You guys use loads of abbreviations in this forum.
Ek sher
Khilash darde muhabbat ki vo hi mehsoos karte hain
Jo apne aap se barr kar kisi ko pyaar karte hain
Shabnam
[This message has been edited by Shabnam (edited March 19, 1999).]
ya sawal shabnam ke liya hai..mere bhai ap kyun parashan hai.how about a good sher from u
waqt kii qaid me.n zi.ndagii hai magar
cha.nd gha.Diyaa.N yahii hai.n jo aazaad hai
in ko kho kar abhii jaan-e-jaa.N
umr bhar na taraste ra
dil dilseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Acha dilse jee vo sawaal mere liye tha. I thought so but got a little confused when saqib replied to it. Vese daal mein kuch bhi kaal nahin hai. Zaroori nahin hai ke muhabbat aur bewafai sirf Ishq mein ho sakti hai aur na hi sirf aurat mard mein hoti hai. Dosti mein bhi muhabbat hoti hai aur rishtaydaari mein bhi. Zindagi mein kayee waqiye aise hote hain jin ki waja se dukhee sher sun kar insaan relate kar sakta hai
Does that answer your question
Itna na chaaho ke khud ko hi bhula daalo
Har ek ko muhabbat ki ye ada nahin bhaati
Shabnam
mere sawal ko ap nahi samjee,the only reason I am asking is that in my sher the word aurat came, you wanted to know what it is,,in my first reply i wrote garbar hai..you said what did I do msaqibj....putting ?????????? you asked me what do i mean by ??,well it was just a question..I did not mean to say anything bad..if you are offended...I will try not to ask you anymore question..but please...smile...be happy go lucky
Well as far as mohabat..ishq ..pyar goes
ye sab ike baqwas chees hai, is dunyia ma koi kise se pyar mohabat nahi karta hai..sab apna ap ko dhoka data hain...(kiya kise film ke shooting ho rahi hai..ha.ha.ha)
Shabnam ke tara muskrata raho
and save me a piece of cake..bye
dard-e-dil meiN kamee na ho jaaye
dosthi dushmani na ho jaaye
tum meri dosthi ka dam na bharo
aasmaaN muddayee na ho jaaye
baiThata hoon hamesha rindoN meiN
kahiN zaahid wali na ho jaaye
apne khooye wafa se Darta hoon
aashiqi bandagi na ho jaaye
No I was not offended at all Did I sound offended. I don't know if I still understand what it is that you are trying to get at but never mind. I don't mind you asking questions afterall if we don't ask we never know
Anyway take care
Chalti hoon lot ke milti hoon
Naashta kar liya hai kya. Kaam par hain ya ghar par. Aaj to jummah hai na namaz ke liye jaayenge kya
Allah Hafiz
Shabnam
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