Guest of the Week - ajazali

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Re: Guest of the Week - ajazali

kia muhabbat aur nafrat jaise jazbe shayari main bayan ho sakte hain?:
ji mohabbat aur nafrat ka izhaar shayri se mumkin hai
lekn main samjhta hun k nafrat ka izhaar shayri main mukammal taur pe nahi kia ja skta

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leken wo shayri apni azdawaji zindgi shuru honay se pehlay se kar rha hai :chilly:

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you mean poets don’t want to look mean by using terms like ‘tera kakh na rawe’ ‘tut painay! tera mobile chhin jae’ :hehe:

BTW I remember some songs (call it poetry) where they expressed hatred for other party…

‘tu ne dil mera toRa kaheen ka chhoRa.. Sanam Bewafa’
‘tera kisi pe aae dil, tera bhi koi dukhae dil’ :hehe:

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you mean jis ne muhabbat na ki ho, usse muhabbat ke bare main nahin likhna chahiye? :hmmm:

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:hehe:
mere khayal hai ko bohat mushkil hai, es tarah k alfaaz to wesay bhi poetry main fit karna mushkil hain.
main nai aik dafa Jaun Elia ki aik ghazal k aik do shair ka satya-naas kia tha :smiley:

**Tumharay wastay behtar nahi es raah pe chalna
Tumhain koe munafa baksh karo baar karna hai
Nikalta hai kahan se es main koe ta`meer ka pehlu
Tera maqsad mohabat ko zaleel o khuwaar karna hai
**

lekn jis ka dil toot-ta hai oos ka catharsis itni “halki phulki” bad-dua nahi hota :hehe:

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Re: Guest of the Week - ajazali

mohabbat nai, azdawaji zindgi se pehlay azdawaji zindgi k baray main likhnay ki baat kar raha hun,

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main pehlay silent reader tha. lekn image wali poetry dekh nai pata tha, oos k leay main nai at random usename bana lea aur ab oossi ka saath guzara karna parh raha hai :bummer:

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you mean aadab e mubashirat likhne wale uncle ki 4 beewiyan hain :faizy:

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shayari main boht fitting ho rahi hain aajkal.. jaise ye shair:

adawaten thin, ranjishen thin, pata nahin kia kia tha
bichaRne wale main sab kuch tha iodine ki kami na thi

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Farhat Abbas Shah :hmmm: kia unhon ne qunatity ke chakkar main quality pe compromise nahin kia?

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wasi shah ki 4 beewiyan hain :eek::eek:

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oss ki poetry kam mash-hoor hai, lekn wesay oos ne itna zayda nai likha, mera khyal hai

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:teggy: calling STA… Aadab e mubashirat aur tohfa e Dulha kis ne likhi hain

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Do u think expressing ur feeling in a shair which is written by someone else is better than your own simple words

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:rotfl:

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Good question... connected question.. kia ab bhi dulha dulhan ko sunane ke liye shayari ke ratte lagate hain?

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baaz dafa aisa hota hai k aapko apni feeling k izhaar k leay alfaz nahi miltay, aur koe shair ye kaam kar sakta hai
lekn baaz dafa aisa bhi hota hai, koe bhi shair aapki feelings express nai kar skta ha siwaye sada lafzon ky

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I always had a argument wid my teacher about why would you need som1elss words to bring some wazn in what you actualy sayng

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shayer to kar laitay hain, lekn har aik k pass apnay aap ko express krnay ki ability nahi hoti.