Momin KhaN Momin** kii is Ghazal kaa ek she’r lagtaa hai:
asar usko zaraa nahiiN hotaa
ranj raaHat fazaa nahiiN hotaa****
aapke diye huye she’r meN zaraa sii tasHeeH karnaa chaahuuNgaa:
kisko hai zauq-e-talKh-kalaami, laik [NOT lekin]
jang bin kuchh mazaa nahiiN hotaa
isii Ghazal kaa ek she’r hai jo Ghalib ko is qadar pasand aayaa thaa k vo is she’r ke 'evaz apnaa pooraa deevaan Momin ko dene ke liye razaa_mand ho gaye the:
tum mere paas hote ho, goyaa!
jab ko’ii doosraa nahiiN hotaa****
ma’nvii ai’tabaar se kuchh radd o badal ke saath is she’r ko MajrooH Sultanpurii ne apnii ek film ‘Love in Tokyo’ meN must’amil kiyaa thaa aur jise Raf’i saaHab aur Lata Mangeshkar jii ne alag alag mauq’oN par gaayaa thaa…mulaaHizah farmaaiye:**
hahah. Last night, we were discussing why Afghanis are always in war mode in one of history forums thread. TLK said that because they are descendent of Chengez khan. My reply was 'per Bahadur Shah tak aate aate changezi khoon thanda ho chuka tha'. :)
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Kahe hai sun ke meri sarguzasht wo be reham
yeh kon zikr hai jaane bhi do, huwa so huwa
Ek to Ghalib hi hain, doosra aap bataen, aur iss pewandkari ka sabab bhi.
jii, saHeeH farmaayaa. ek to haiN chachaa** Ghaalib**** aur duusre haiN Bahadur Shaah**** 'Zafar'****.
sabab-e-paiwand_kaarii yeh hai k mausoof o oolaa [Ghalib] chuN k darbaar ke 'ooficial' shaa'ir nahiiN the...vo to Hazrat-e-Zauq the liHaaza unkaa vazeefah nihaayat qaleel thaa is liye jab jab unheN 'Kharche paanii' kii kamii maHsoos hotii to vo Shahenshaah-e-Hind kii mad'H meN kuchh farmaate aur jahaaN_panaah unke vazeehe meN Khaatir Khowaah izaafa kar dete. bahot kuchh Zafar kii mad'H meN likhaa jo Zauq ko ek aaNkh na bhaataa. jealous!**
**hehehe…na Hajmola N Karmina is liye ‘fazaa’ Kharaab kar rakkhii thii.
‘tazmeen bar Ghazal Zafar’ ke 11 band haiN aur har band ke pahle 3 misr’e Ghalib ke haiN jab k aaKhirii 2 misr’e [she’r] Zafar kii ek Ghazal ke haiN.
aap Ghaur kijiye k kaise Ghalib ne kaisii chaabuk_dastii se baKhiyaa_kaarii kii hai k angrezii emN kaheNge k ‘seamless’ joining! it’s kinda "MOLEDED’ shaa’irii :)**