GHAZAL: Meri Jaan! Mujh Se Mil Ja...

[Zamil]

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@AsSweetAs

Meri jaan mujh se mil ja, tujhe kaun rokta hai !

kya kehnay… bouhat achay bhai… :k:

Bohatttt Shukria Janaab…!

[nakhan]

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@Zamil

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Kisi khush-nazar ko kya k teri shiddaton ko samjhe Mere dil ki kuchh qadar kar k ye dard-aashna hai ( poet: Zamil** )** [RIGHT](written in 2002*)*[/RIGHT]

Wow Zamil lovely,
waisay to poori hi Ghazla bohot achi hay lakin ye shair to bohot hi Umdaah hay...

wasay sorry main aaj tak aap ka naam "Zalim" parhta aya hoon aaj ji correction hoi hay k ye "Zalim" nahi "Zamil" hay :D

Once again thanks for a lovely Ghazal

[Zamil]

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@nakhan

Wow Zamil lovely, waisay to poori hi Ghazla bohot achi hay lakin ye shair to bohot hi Umdaah hay...

wasay sorry main aaj tak aap ka naam "Zalim" parhta aya hoon aaj ji correction hoi hay k ye "Zalim" nahi "Zamil" hay :D

Once again thanks for a lovely Ghazal

*Khan Jee ! Ghazal pasand karne ka bohat shukria.....!:) *

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Or sorry ki zarurat nahi....nazar hai, chook hi jaati hai.....
Jaise "makhan" ka ham-qaafiya bhi to ho sakta tha "nakhan".....:D