Essay likh lo-- waisey likh lo

[champ]

Re: Essay likh lo-- waisey likh lo

I will be Taking Part too. just tell me When is the last Date.

[Krypton]

Re: Essay likh lo-- waisey likh lo

champ-march 10 , sooooon:smilestar:

lost souls-:aq:

[champ]

Re: Essay likh lo-- waisey likh lo

looking for pencil & paper in Panic

No way .

[champ]

Re: Essay likh lo-- waisey likh lo

Jhoot K fawaid

Nazreen Jhoot aik aisa zabardast shay hay jo har mushkil main app key madad karta hay, aur app ko ghar say Juttian parnay say bachata hay, agar App k imtehaan main number kam aye, ya dostoon K sath Gol gappay khay, Ya Phir Ghar bataye bagair Sair ko gaye hoon , tu Jhoot app ko ko is main say makhan main say baal key tarha Nikal sakta hay, Jhoot bolnay K liay Tajarba utna ziada zaroori nahi Jitni ziada Zaroori app key masoom Shakal hay, agar app key shakal ziada masoom hay tu jhoot na bol kar app apni Shakal khud zaya kar rahay hain.
Jhoot bolnay k liay mandarja Zail Cheezoon ka hona Bhut zaroori hay.
1. Masoom Shakal
2. Paka Irada
3. Thori si himat
4. Jhoot pay Bhrosa
Agar app K pass yeh cheezain mujood hain tu app Aimandari say Jhoot bol saktay hain , aur pakray jaanay Kay Chances bhut he kam hoon gay, Jhoot ko aur ziada pakka karnay K liay app Kasmain B kha Saktay hain, Kasmain aam tur un logon ki khai jaati hain jin ko aap pasand nahi kartay. Jhoot app key School life main B bhut madad karta hay, App school say Chutti mar saktay hain , aur dostoon K sath Picture dekhnay B Jaa saktay hain. Agar teacher poochay tu Apnay wafat paa chukay Dada jii ko 19-20 dafa aur be istimaal kar saktay hian.
Main tu Nazreen chun k Jhoot Bolta Nahi, Na He is ka Koi Tajarba hay. Bas Zindgi nay Bhut Kuch Sikha dia hay…………. App nay B jab Jhoot bolna ho, Ya jhoot bolnay main koi Dushwari aati ho, yaa koi aur masla ho, tu Muj say Rabta……… mat Karin ……….. kyun K main nay Jhoot bolnay Key koi factory nahi lagai hoi.
Accha tu ab main Chalta hoon………… Rab Rakha.

[champ]

Re: Essay likh lo-- waisey likh lo

Can i post 1 more ? Hain hain

[Krypton]

Re: Essay likh lo-- waisey likh lo

if its ur original work:smilestar:

yes:@:

[champ]

Re: Essay likh lo-- waisey likh lo

Yes it is…
Main nay pooray 2 ghantay lagaye hain Uper walay Essay per.

[Krypton]

Re: Essay likh lo-- waisey likh lo

are you sure:chai:

ok go ahead, leme read upar wala:D

[Lost_souls]

@iggle

Okay very interesting LS! :)

thanxxxxxx a lot....Am i the winner then?

[champ]

Re: Essay likh lo-- waisey likh lo

*Mera Gaoon *

Mera aik gaoon hay, us ka naam Chak420 hay, Who Pujnab Pakistan main rehta hay, Wahana per Na koi Bas aati hay na koi Rickshaw jaata hay, Jo B aata hay Paidal aata hay, Humaray gaoon main bhut sari mujjain hain jo K sara din Khatioon main Awara gardi karti hain, Humaray gaoon key galian Bhut tang hain, Humaray gaoon main Sheeday halwai Key Dokan b hay, Wahana per motay motay ladoo hotay hain, Sheeda apnay Ladoo Khud he khata hay, Humaray gaoon main Aik Dactar B hay , Jis nay Pakistan Computer College say Medical key Degree li hay , Us Doctor ka naam Doctor Billu hay, aur Clinic ha Naam Billu Clinic hay, Humaray gaoon main aik Malak sahib B rehtay hain, Un k bass aik baray munh wala Kutta hay, Jo har Sharif aadmi ko kaat leta hai, Humaray gaoon main aik 120 saal ka baba b hay, Jo K apnay app ko abhi jawan kehta hay, Jo b us ko baba kehta hay who Danda ley kar us k pechay par jaata hay, Humaray gaoon main baba Quaid-e-Azam K zmanay key aik ghaari b hay, Jo K jab B chalty hai poora gaoon Hil jaata hay, Is liay usay Ramzaan main logon ko sehri main uthanay k liay istimaal kia jaaata hay. Humaray gaoon main aik Tractor b hay Jisay sara Gaoon Mil kar istimaal kar hay, Who Tractor bhut he keemti hay , Museum walay usay hum say Khridnay key bhut koshis kar rahay hain, Kyun k who Pakistan bannay k waqt key Nishani hay. Humaray Gaoon K fiza bhut he saaf hay, itni saaf K App Zmeen say Aasmaan Yahana tak k chand ko B dekh saktyay hain, Is k ilawa Humaray gaoon main aur b bhut c cheezain hain, Who phir kabhi bataoon ga.
Ab main chalta hoon. Rab rakha.

[Krypton]

Re: Essay likh lo-- waisey likh lo

very ncie champ:D

anyone else eyeing that smileeeey, cmonn, 1 day to go:chai:

[Mirch]

Re: Essay likh lo-- waisey likh lo

@Champ. Awesome . :k:

[Krypton]

deadline is here:smilestar: jaldi kero sab

arrite, competition closed, judges will be here shortly!

[Krypton]

Re: Essay likh lo-- waisey likh lo

Judges please follow the "rubric" below :D
**
Grade these creative guppies on a scale of 1-10, taking into account, creativity, diction, style, and anything extra...like humor? good luck!

flooder-e-azam**- hawai jahaz

-Niksik

-James Bhaand

Iggle-

shona- flower

N-

J-

I-
mirch-mirch

N

J

I
merun nisa- LOVE

N

J

I
champ- Jhoot k fawaid

N

J

I
champ ka goan

N

J

I

[Niksik]

Re: Essay likh lo-- waisey likh lo

I need some time. I’m still reading

[Krypton]

Re: Essay likh lo-- waisey likh lo

okie dokey nikky.

and as expected one of our judges is late and has left a message, guess who
**
"Judge tu main aisa karooN gaaa
inn ko apni maternal grandmother yaad aa jaien gi

but first I have to go out for a while
have to get Diapers ( #4e**** siz**** ) , anday , double roti and hara dhaniyaa "**

[Niksik]

Re: Essay likh lo-- waisey likh lo

JB

[James_Bhaand]

Re: Essay likh lo-- waisey likh lo

abhi main revise kar raha hooN
pharraaaay bana raha hooN
phirr ratttaaa lagaon gaa
phirr number dooN ga

[Iggle]

flooder-e-azam- hawai jahaz

Niksik -

James Bhaand -

Iggle - 8

shona- flower

N-

J-

I- 7

mirch-mirch

N

J

I - 8

merun nisa- LOVE

N

J

I - 8

champ- Jhoot k fawaid

N

J

I - 9

champ ka goan

N

J

I - 9

I enjoyed Champ's creativity and enthusiasm. :)

[James_Bhaand]

Re: Essay likh lo-- waisey likh lo

flooder-e-azam- hawai jahaz

Niksik -

James Bhaand - 7

Iggle - 8

shona- flower

N-

J- 5

I- 7

mirch-mirch

N

J - 7

I - 8

merun nisa- LOVE

N

J - 7

I - 8

champ- Jhoot k fawaid

N

J - 8

I - 9

champ ka goan

N

J - 9

I - 9

Champooooo you did a good job :k: