Complete the shair (Poetry Game)

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dooooobta, ab thik hay?

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doobnay laga hoon main

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The word is :

Duubataa

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*tumhin to ho jise kahatii hai naakhudaa duniyaa *
*bachaa sako to bachaa lo kay Duubataa huun main *

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Abb aap logon kee baree

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really? ڈوباتا؟

doobta = ڈوبتا

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oh u mean dehshat gard .,hum samjhay khud doob raha ho ga lol

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here is the full Ghazal

kamaal-e-ishq hai diivaanaa ho gayaa huu.N mai.n
ye kis ke haath se daaman chhu.Daa rahaa huu.N mai.n

*tumhii.n to ho jise kahatii hai naaKhudaa duniyaa *
*bachaa sako to bachaa lo ki Duubataa huu.N mai.n *

ye mere ishq kii majabuuriyaa.N ma'az-allaah
tumhaaraa raaz tumhii.n se chhupaa rahaa huu.N mai.n

is ik hijaab pe sau be-hijaabiyaa.N sadaqe
jahaa.N se chaahataa huu.N tumko dekhataa huu.N mai.n

bataane vaale vahii.n par bataate hai.n ma.nzil
hazaar baar jahaa.N se guzar chukaa huu.N mai.n

kabhii ye zom ki tuu mujh se chhup nahii.n sakataa
kabhii ye vaham ki Khud bhii chhupaa huaa huu.N mai.n

mujhe sune na ko_ii mast-e-baadaa-e-isharat
'Majaz' TuuTe huye dil kii ik sadaa huu.N mai.n

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issi liye toh keh raha tha kay matlab badal jata hai.

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Hamaare Saadgi thi ........ .... Par marna

tera Aana na tha Zalim mager ............. jaanay ki !

hint < first one is compound word like nazr-e-karam...

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Tum?

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nahi

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Hint?

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second line Tamheed?

Taken from Amjad Islam Amjad columns which he writes under this misra.

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correct. ab pehli line boojhen. In absence of P_G I got help from google to continue the game.

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pehla misra is difficult, google bhai help. :)

Thinking about it

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Hint: pyar bhari nigah

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Nigah-e-ulfat?

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Nigah ko aur kiya kehte hain? ulfat se milta julta lafz.

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nazar-e-karam