bikhar gaye heiN tera intizaar kartey huwey

Koyal · July 25, 2003, 11:12pm

and welcome in poetry section..

Koyal · July 25, 2003, 11:13pm

thanks chand ji..

Koyal · July 25, 2003, 11:18pm

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Koyal · July 25, 2003, 11:23pm

thanks Wg and nadia H..:)

ullujii · July 25, 2003, 11:52pm

lajawab

chodhry · July 25, 2003, 11:57pm

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great stuff koyal..:k:

Koyal · July 26, 2003, 12:09am

koN?

Koyal · July 26, 2003, 12:11am

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thanks ..but plzzz ap is avatar se muskuratey huwey na aienay main utreiy ghi

warana tu

wo behosh ho k giray ghi ye avataar taktey huwey ..

PS: jus joking chodry saheeb mind na kijaiy gha

_Nazish · July 26, 2003, 12:26am

beautiful

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 26, 2003, 11:56am

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

teray firaaq key lamhey shumaar kartey huwey
bikhar gaye heiN tera intizaar kartey huwey

to meiN bhi khush hooN us sey jaa key keh dena
agar wo khush hey mujhey beqaraar kartey huwey

meiN muskuraata huwa aai'ney meiN ubhrooN ga
wo ro parrey gi achaanak singhaar kartey huwey

wo keh rahi thi samandar nahi aaNkheN heiN
meiN un meiN doob gaya aetibaar kartey huwey

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Lijiye hum Aa gaey Aap kaa intezaar khatam huwaa :p

BanJaraa · July 26, 2003, 11:56pm

Very nice Koyal Bi … aap ka hussan-e-intekhaab LaJawab hai… unique as your are

Koyal · July 27, 2003, 1:40am

thanks nazo..

Koyal · July 27, 2003, 1:42am

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *

Lijiye hum Aa gaey Aap kaa intezaar khatam huwaa :p
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shukran ap ki aa'mad huwie aur hamar be intzaar khatam huwa ..;) wo aien ghar hamarya khuda ki qudrat :)

Koyal · July 27, 2003, 1:44am

ap ka zoaq hia banjara ji warna koyal tu bus utha ka post kar daiti..

arfin99 · July 27, 2003, 2:54pm

Bauhat zabardast Ghazal hai KOYAL JI, :k:

Koyal · July 27, 2003, 5:20pm

shukria shukria 99

_Masoom_Muskaan · July 27, 2003, 8:07pm

boht he achei koyal jee:)

BanJaraa · July 27, 2003, 11:00pm

koyal jii maana ke baat zoak ki hai magar kuch hisa shoak ka bi hai... Kion??? :)

ullujii · July 28, 2003, 12:57am

AP ke poem

Koyal · July 28, 2003, 1:36am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by BanJaraa: *
koyal jii maana ke baat zoak ki hai magar kuch hisa shoak ka bi hai... Kion??? :)
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sahi kaha :) shaoq ho tu zoaq khud se bun jata..:)