besti ho gayee :(

Re: besti ho gayee :frowning:

^ mein ne bhi aisa hi suna hova hay :konfused:

girtey haiN shehsawaar he maydaan-e-jang maiN
woh tifl he kya girey jo ghutnooN kay bal chaley

Re: besti ho gayee :frowning:

:hug: :flower2:

Re: besti ho gayee :(

The correct sher is what I wrote.

Re: besti ho gayee :(

ahan k:-)

Re: besti ho gayee :frowning:

:topic: yahan meri besti ho gayee.. aur aap shero shayri kar rahe hai :frowning:

Re: besti ho gayee :frowning:

:rotfl:

Re: besti ho gayee :frowning:

Overconfidence is not a good thing. I suggest you check your sources :stuck_out_tongue:

Re: besti ho gayee :(

I guess you are right, Hunk.

:-)