Bait Bazi ..

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 11, 2005, 4:29pm

Re: Bait Bazi ..

*Na tha shairr se koii vaasta na tha shaairii se mae aashna
tere durd ne, terii yaad ne, mujhe shairr kehna sikha diya *

High-Tech · February 11, 2005, 6:50pm

Re: Bait Bazi ..

chali rael ni chali rael ni
sonray rab nay banraya tera mera mael ni

X_Communist · February 11, 2005, 8:19pm

Re: Bait Bazi ..

Yeh aday-e-khud fareybi to mizaaj hai hamara
Na kareeb tha kinara, na kareeb hai kinara
Na khata thi doston ki na qusoor tha hamara
Mujhey rah-e-dosti may, meri sadgi nay mara

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 11, 2005, 9:07pm

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^ boht achay :k:

*ab ye socha hai apnii zaat mein simtay rahien
hum ne ker k dekh lee sub se shanasaii bohtt
apna saaya bhee juda lagta hai apnii zaat se
hum ne us se dil laganay ki saza payee bohtt *

“teyy”

smilly · February 12, 2005, 11:50am

Re: Bait Bazi ..

Tumharay sheher ka mosam berha suhana lagay!
main aik shaam chura loon ager bura na lagay!

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 12, 2005, 12:11pm

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yaadoN ka ik jhonka aaya hum se milne barsoN baad
itna roye pehle na thay jitna roye barso`N baad

smilly · February 12, 2005, 1:08pm

Re: Bait Bazi ..

dayaar-e-noor main tera shabon ka saathi ho
koi to ho jo meri vahasheton ka saathi ho

X_Communist · February 13, 2005, 1:40am

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Thanks HeartHacker. :)

Woh badalta hai to beysakhta meri ankhen
Apnay hathon ki lakeeron say ulajh jati hain

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 13, 2005, 2:11am

Re: Bait Bazi ..

Yeh aday-e-khud fareybi to mizaaj hai hamara
Na kareeb tha kinara, na kareeb hai kinara
Na khata thi doston ki na qusoor tha hamara
Mujhey rah-e-dosti may, meri sadgi nay mara

*wow .. :( .. *

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 13, 2005, 2:13am

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wow .. wow .. .. MashAllah .. thanx a bunch for sharing .. looking forward for some more shers from you .. :-/ .. do you mind if i put either one of your shers (from your collection) in my sig .. ??

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 13, 2005, 2:37am

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ok so from "yeh"

**yeh shehsay, yeh sapnya, yeh dahgay, yeh ristay .. *
*kesay khabar hai kay kahan tot jayein .. *
*mohabbat kay darya mein tinkay wafa kay ..
na janay yeh kis mor per doob jayein ..
**

X_Communist · February 13, 2005, 3:23am

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Ghazal, yes ofcourse. Thanks for the compliments. I'm always expecting nice peices from u,heart hacker and lamhey as well.

Golden_Scorpion_1 · February 13, 2005, 6:35am

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WOW… some wonderful Shair here
Tnx to all of U for Sharng such Beauties..

Na keh skay haiN ussay dil ka haal Meri Khata!
Magar ye kia ke wo ruswa karay Zamanay maiN…
(Golden Scorpion)

smilly · February 13, 2005, 2:16pm

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wow …zeberdest
kahan say chori kia hay

Nishat-e-jaan ki qasam tu nehi to kuch bhi nehi
bohet dinon tujhay bhula ker daikha hay

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 13, 2005, 4:10pm

Re: Bait Bazi ..

*ye sarii umeR kissii aashuftagii mien raayega`N ker dii
us ko yaad rakha hai jisse dil mein bhulana tha
wo jub oojhal howa tu hum bhee apne aap se chonkay
usse awaz denii thee usse wapas bulana tha *

"alif"

smilly · February 13, 2005, 4:48pm

Re: Bait Bazi ..

Aata hay jo khooshi ki inteha per
bohet royai hain us aansoo ki khatir

r

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 13, 2005, 11:42pm

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**Communist:* thankew very much .. and you are most welcome .. :-) ..

*raya-kare, qadorat aur nafrat ke fiza main
Alam mujheko mohabbat ka uthana chahay tha *
*"Alif" ..

Golden_Scorpion_1 · February 14, 2005, 4:35am

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KaheeN se Bhi Chori naheeN kia…
Jab koi Doosray ka Shair yaad naheeN ata tu … Apna bana letay haiN

Next ALif hay … humm

Sharabi Ghazal Yaad AGayi..

Eimaan ka Gham na kar..ThooRi se tou Pee Zahid
Waada Raha ALLAH se, Hum Maafi Diladengay…

Yeh…

HeArT_HaCKeR · February 14, 2005, 11:27am

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ye ishQ tha faQt ishQ jis ka masla tha
is imtehaan mien na sadQay thay na istikharay
Khuda kere terii umeR mien ginay jayien
wo din jo hum ne terii yaad mien guzaray

"yeh"

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 14, 2005, 5:36pm

Re: Bait Bazi ..

yeh bhi tehk hai woh chala gay, mujhe band rastay main chor kar
yeh bhi tehk hai kay woh na ayay ga khabhi but Ana kay tor kar

"Ray"