Bait Bazi ..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Woh kiya tha jisse hum ne thukra dya
Mugar Umar bhar haath multe rahe

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Aarzo hai ke tu yahaN aayee
aur phir umar bhar na jaaye kaheiN

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na janay ho gaya Hon iss qadar Hassas May kab say
Wasi`may jub bhee hansta hOn toa ankhen bheeg jatee haIN

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NaUmeed naa ho Inn se aye Rehber-e-Farzaanaa
Kum-Kosh to heiN laiken bey-zoq nahin raahi

NaUmeed-->disappoint
Farzaanaa-->Intelligent
Kum-Kosh-->Languid

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In barishon say dosti achi nahi faraz
kacha tera makan hay kuch to khayal kar
R???

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Rowk lo ugar ghalat chaley koi
Bukhash do ugar khata karey koi

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koi yeh?
Ya tera tazkira karay her shaks
ya koi ham say guftugoo na karay
yeh???

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YaaN Huey khaak say barabur hum
WaaN wohy naaz-e-khud numaey hay

Yeh

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yeh aur baat kay mujh say khaffa khaffa bhi raha
woh doston say mera haal poochta bhi raha
ALIF???

Who thinks I shouldnt go into work tonite
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Iss qadar payyar say aaey jaan-e-jahaN rukha hay
Dil ke rukhsaar pay iss waqat tery yaad ne haat

Next: Tey

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Tumhain jab milain fursattain meray dil say bojh utar do
main bohot dinon say udas hoon mujhey aik sham udar do
WAO?
and plz could u explain ur last shair i did'nt get the last line
YAAD NE HAAT? i did'nt get this

cant think of any title???
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Wo naa aaey to satati hai khalush si dil ko
Wo jo aaey to khalush aur jawan hoti hay

Next: yeh

YAAD NE HAAT?
Faiz used HAAT instead of HAATH to keep balance(wazun), here is very next shaer:
"Yun gumaaN hoota hai, Agurcheh Hay abhi subha-e-firaaq
dhull gya hijar kaa dinn, aa bhi gaiy wasal ki raat"