Bait Bazi - October 2013

tarash · October 9, 2013, 4:37pm

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

Ye Sheher Kisi Aina Kirdaar Badan Par
ilzam Lagate Howe Darta Bhi Nahi Hai

hey/ye

KKF · October 9, 2013, 4:39pm

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

**ham yak_jehtoN ko nahiiN ma'loom do_rangii
yaa saaz yeh Khaamosh hai yaa yaa zarb-e-do_dastii

a she'r by: my Dad!

TE/YE**

tarash · October 9, 2013, 4:50pm

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

Tum Ko Kiya Khabar Janaa! Hum Udaas Logon Par,
Shaam Ke Sabhi Manzar Ungliyaan Uthaate Han…

hey/noon

khamosh_girl · October 9, 2013, 5:12pm

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

***Har Mulaqat Par Waqt Ka Takaza Hua
Jab Jab Use Dekha Dil Ka Dard Taza Hua
Suni Thi Sirf Gazal Mein Judai Ki Batein
Ab Khud Par Biti Toh Haqiqat Ka Andaza Hua...

hey/alif***

ehsan · October 9, 2013, 6:00pm

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

**ham ko to gardish-e-haalaat pe ronaa aayaa
rone vaale tujhe kis baat pe ronaa aayaa

alif**

tarash · October 9, 2013, 6:01pm

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

In Haalon Kab Apnay Aap Ko Dekha Tha ?
Kehnay Ko Din Raat Guzartay Jaatay Hain

hey/noon

ehsan · October 10, 2013, 6:29am

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

**nazm ulajhii huii hai siine mein
misare atake hue hain hothon par

pey/rey **

muqawwee123 · October 10, 2013, 6:32am

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

Pareshan raat sari hai sitaro tum so jao
sukut-e-marg tari hai sitaron tum to so jao

jeem/ wao

ehsan · October 10, 2013, 6:34am

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

Load shedding kay doraan gatey honegey.

**jab bhii nazm-e-maikadaa badalaa gayaa
ek na ek jaam-e-hasin toraa gayaa

gaaf/alif
**

muqawwee123 · October 10, 2013, 6:39am

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

Nhain jo aap ne jo shair post kia tha uss main pet ki kharabi ki taraf ishara tha.. aisi halat main mubtala log padhte honge

achchhaa saa koii mausam tanahaa saa koii aalam
har vaqt aa ronaa to bekaar kaa ronaa hai

he/ ye

hybridkamal · October 10, 2013, 7:43am

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

Hein loag wohi jahan mein acchey
aatey hein jo kaam doosroun ke

kaaf/ye

muqawwee123 · October 10, 2013, 7:49am

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

Kal yahan karobar hai sab band
karlo karni hai jo kamai aaj

alif/ je

hybridkamal · October 10, 2013, 7:57am

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

jugnu ko din ki roshni main parakhnay ki zid karain
bachchay hamaray ehad kay chaalaak ho gaye

gaaf/ye

khubsoorat · October 10, 2013, 8:15am

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

Yun to rehmat hai Teri, Teray ghazab pay haawi,
Phir bhi mehshar mein mera rakhna Khudaya parda,,

Pey

hybridkamal · October 10, 2013, 10:37am

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

Phir sawan rutt ki pawan chali, tum yaad aaye
Phir pattoun ki paazaib baji, tum yaad aaye

alif/ye

khubsoorat · October 10, 2013, 2:38pm

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

Aon ga yaad tujh ko main ek bar phir se,
Jab apnay he faislay tujhy barbad karen gay,

Gaaf/ye

ehsan · October 10, 2013, 2:55pm

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

**Gair lein mehfil mein bose jaam ke
ham rahen yuun tashnaalab paigaam ke

kaaf/ye
**

Diva · October 10, 2013, 3:06pm

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

*KAchey gharey ney jeet li naadi charhi hui
Mazboot kashtiyon ko kinaara nehi milla
*

khubsoorat · October 10, 2013, 3:11pm

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

Main khud asooda hun,kam kosh hun, ya pathar hun,,
Zakhm kha kr bhi mujhy dard ka irfaa'n na hua,,

hey/alif

tarash · October 10, 2013, 4:35pm

Re: Bait Bazi - October 2013

Hum aah bhi karte hain to ho jate hain badnaam,
Wo qatal bhi karte hain to charcha nahin hota.

hey/alif