hum hein lajawab,
i am confused, were you talking to the mouse inabsentia (in which case, brother you are far more in need of care than the mouse of my machine) or have you mistook AQ to be the mouse??
^ & a word of advice : shaam key baad, buzurghoon ko call nahi kertey, chukeye yeye log sheiree mey mubtila hotey hein, raat key awkaat per. in keye radeef/ kafiya ka tasulsul uljh sekta hey.
zobia,
good idea. but, i do not change non living and living things easily - even an inanimate mouse can have a sense of affinity...
when i got it, it seemed really useful.
& now, it only wants to make itself useless to me..
someone else may trash their mouse, in a minute.
i dont have the heart to do that.
^ & a word of advice : shaam key baad, buzurghoon ko call nahi kertey, chukeye yeye log sheiree mey mubtila hotey hein, raat key awkaat per. in keye radeef/ kafiya ka tasulsul uljh sekta hey.
Nahi pata tha na. Aksar din ke time call karta hoo. Ab mujhe kya pata ke raat ke 10 baje ke baad Shairi ki bari hoti hai :(
^ & a word of advice : shaam key baad, buzurghoon ko call nahi kertey, chukeye yeye log sheiree mey mubtila hotey hein, raat key awkaat per. in keye radeef/ kafiya ka tasulsul uljh sekta hey.
aap kee urdu masha Allah kaafi pur asr hai...
aap kaY nazdeek shaairi koi beemaari hai yaa koi buri aadat... mubtala - ibtilaa -
baqol iqbal
mubtala-e-dard koi uzu ho, roti haiN aankH
kiss qadar hamdard saaraY jism kee hoti hai aankH
laikin
aaNkh waaloN ko khabar kiyaa
bay khudi kiyaa cheez hai
haaN
DushwariyoN kaY daqyaanoosi khiyaalaat maiN
kissi kee anaa aur khud daari kaa baheemaana qatal
kaY uss kaY baa'd chaahaY jo kuch ho woh kar guzraY
laikin chaahay bhee tau bhee hargiz naa paaye saNbhal :)
as ardent and vivid caricature of your arrogance for being singly self-appointed spokesperson of YOUR urdu, & no one else's...
i fully realize how you brought in Iqbal's word, to flesh out your desired verbal effect
no i did not say poetry is an infliction.
i write too & can attest to value of good poetic thoughts by anyone, including yours.
but if you will, elaborate on the defect of the lines you wrote which follow:
'DushwariyoN kaY daqyaanoosi khiyaalaat maiN (is this all as you think of Dushwari's thoughts?)
kissi kee anaa aur khud daari kaa baheemaana qatal (is that your anaa?)
kaY uss kaY baa'd chaahaY jo kuch ho woh kar guzraY (who is the doer?)
laikin chaahay bhee tau bhee hargiz naa paaye saNbhal'(who can't sembhel?)
that above was not expected of you.
unless, you can describe the intent of these.
go back and read the parts of your own wordings as well... it was along the same lines and ONLY in response to things you called... however, daqyaanoosi only means Old fashioned... it's funny that attributing the word "buzurghoN" for me or even questioning like (calling me mouse?) was expected of you but not vice versa?
If you can not take the humour in the same way you expect from others, do not do it :)
AQ,
i agree. equality of bounds.
good humor on my part though, & you begrudged.
thanks for the smileys.
shaba khaire.
best,
Dushwari
yes, name calling like calling me a MOUSE was definitely a good humour .. I agree :)
and my only word DAQYAANOOSI which means OLD is wrong... funny... i won't use the appropriate word for the situation for it may be more offensive for you now
Tell me anything that you find offensive in my post other than daqyaanoosi??? Be honest... I can tell you that is the only word that offended you... can you tell me what do you think it actually means according to you??? and if it actually means OLD... how different is that than calling me a BUZURGH???? your's is only GOOD humour.... very self appointed spokesperson for your own intellect :-)
positively_negative,
how have you been?
for addressing women, the word guys is not appropriate at all. it will be nice if we all tried addressing women as ladies and men as guys.
i am very old. so very old & i really am thankful to Allah swt for the older age
best,
Dushwari