Tum kiya karo gi sun kai mugh se meri kahani
Be-lutf zindagi kai qissey hain phekai phekaiBarey Shoaq se woh dekh rahe thai hujoom ko
Mugh pe nazar pari tou darechey se hut gaiy
Adaab Arz hai
Here is a shair from Toronto, soon to be your city Cinderalla...
Jo mein sur basujda hoowa kabhi to zameen se anay luggi sudda
tera dil to hai sunum aashana tujhe kiya mille ga namaz mein
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The urdu language is said to have been created for the purpouse of Poetry. Its soft recitations and melodic charms have conquered the hearts of many.
It is unfortuanate that some of the people on this thread tend to abuse it with their low standard Ashar.
It is my great honour to introduce you to real culture one that existed long a go.
Arz hai,
Lal lal Hootoo Pe Goree Kiss Ka naam hai?
Aray Lal lal HOtto pe Piyaa tera nam hai ....
Aee Jee Ojee Kehta Ho Mai woh Karo Jee
One two ka four , four two ka one
My name is Lakhan mera nam hai lakhan
Jawanee Janeman Hasin Dilruba
Rahe to dil jawan nisar ho gaya .....
And a little more
aur ab alla shairy ka arooj apnee ankhoo se dekhye:
sexy sexy sexy mujhe log bolai
Hi sexy bye sexy kyoo bolai?........
So freinds keeping in mind the traditions of the east we must aspire for a higher level one that urdu has given us. Adab.
Wah wah wah... i am really impressed with the pure urdu shayari... stud bahi ke liye urz hai...
Aaise Aaise kaise kaise hogaye, or kaise kaise Aaise Aaise hogaye
Kul tuk the jo ulloo ke puthay, aaj shayar hogaye
Stud ji
Lagta hai ke aap ko Bollywood se bahut Lagaw hai
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,try to switch to Lollywood too :)I a sure u gonna get more of pure Urdu Ashaar there.Thanx for introducing us to the real culture.
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Here is some from Lollywood…
Pyar bharai do Sharmilai nain
Jin se milaa mere dil ko chaen
Koi bhi janai na kiyo mujh se sharmae…
Mere khayalou mai chhaie hai ek surat matwali si
Nazuk si Sharmili si masoom si bholi bhali si
Rahti hai woh door kahi ata pata maloom nahi
hmmm…!!!
isn’t it nice?
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Cindrella Jee I have only one thing to say to you :
Aap Jaisa Koi Meree Zindagee Mai Ai
To Baat Ban Jai Haaaa hahaa Bat ban jai....
Stud
Ahha!
Too late stud jee
I’m already reserved 
Bahut Deaar Kardi Maharban Atai Atai
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Cinderella Jee,
Agar dil ko chot denee hee thee to lafz narm kartee istamal, ab meree kaifyat Sharukh Khan se sunye:
Mere Khudaa Ap Kee Ada Hai Baree Zalim
Mai Rooo Ya Hassooon Karo Mai Kya Karoon................
Surely Reservations are made to be broken.
Omeedvar Stud
hmmm…sorry jee
This reservation is due to a very strong bound of LOVE…can not be broken
finally Cinderella got her Prince charming
now this is perfect for u
Tum Itna Jo Muskura Rahai ho
Kiya Gum Hai Jisko Chhupa Rahai ho
Hey! I’m not Juhi
so don’t start acting like obsessed Shahrukh
just kidding 
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Cinderella
Cindrella Jee,
Well incase one of these days you dont make it home before midnight ask your fairy God Mother about me.
Lekin Har Manna Hamaree fitrat mai naheee:
Jub Pyar Kiyaa To Darna Kya
Iqrar Kya to Darna Kya ..........
Lai Jainge Lai Jainge Dil Wale Dhulanya Lai Jaingai..........
Abhee Tak Omeedvar Stud
Ohhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! GOD
I thought u gonna quit
Well I just can say this
Mammy Daddy meri shadi karwa rahai hai(n)
Sunday ko larkai walai ghar aa rahai hai
Meri Shadi mai TUM bhi aao
Koi piyara sa tuhfa laao....
kiyo kiya khayaal hai???
Will you ;) ?
Paraie Cinderella
Shadeee??!!!!!
Cindrella Jeee,
Aap kee adaoon nai hum ko bana diya hai shayar
My heart feels like a punctured tire.
Yeh Kyaa Hooaaa Mera Dill Toota
Phir Ankhain Kholeeee Kya woh
sapna tha?....................
Cindrella Jee aap apnee shadee kar dain postpone,
Humse thoree batain sunlain on the phone,
Kon hai woh khushnaseeb larka
Omeed hai rishta nahee hua pakka.
Ghamgeen Omeedvar Stud
Hey!
Don’t be sad
Yeh Galyah Yeh Chobara
Yaha Aana Na Dobara
Ab Hum Tu Hoee Pardaisi
Keh Tera Yaha Koi Nahi
Keh Tera Yaha Koi Nahi
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But Stud ji
keep sending ur Aalla Shairy & have fun
U can be a good poet if u keep trying
I’m praying for u to get Snow white OR Sleeping beauty…Cinderella tou gaee hath sai
Cindrella Jee,
Snow White or sleeping beauty to hai hazaar,
Cindrella kee batain mai sunoo bar bar.....
Mera Dil to aapne thukra diyaa hai
Stud jee ko Thainga dikha dya hai
Jab Tumko Koyee Pyar se Bulai gaaa
Tum ko Ek shaks yaad aeee gaaaaa....
Yaad Karoo Gai Mai Jo na hoo too
Mai in ankho mai jo rahoo too
Lagta hai merree line kat gaiee hai
aap kee shadee lag gaee hai
Shadee mai mai araha hoon
Kursiyaa lagane ja raho hoo
Biryane khane aaraha hoon
Biryanee + Raita Loving Stud
Oh! Thanx
Kursiyaa lagane mai madad karne ka shukriya
this one suits u
Mai Nai Teri Zulf Se Judai Tu Nahi Mangi Thi
Matka Manga Tha Surahi Tu Nahi Mangi Thi
Piyaree Bahanyaa Banegi Dulhanyaa…
Waqtai Kukhsat Jo Nishani Talab Ki Tu Kahne Lagai
Daagh Kafi Hai Judai Ka Agar Yaad Rahe
Stud jee don’t forget to bring Raita with u ,cuz I’m not gonna order Raita in my Shaadi’s menu…
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Biryani wali Cinderella
CINDRELA JI CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR LIFE PLANS, AZAD SAHIB ABB KAHEEN AUR JAAL DALIYE.
CIN. i love the mehndi hasan song you wrote earlier i.e. pyar bhare do sharmeeley nain,
here is another one for you good one
tere bheege badan ki khushboo
lehrain bhi huieen mastaani see
teri zulf ko choo kar aaj hui
khamosh hawa deewani see
hunnn ,,,hunnnn,,hunnhunnn
ye roop ka kundan dehka hoowa
ye jismm kachandan mehka hoowa
ilzaam naa dena phir mujh ko
ho jai agar nadani see
if you like this let me know i can compete it next time, and give yo some more m. hasan songs.
here is one of my fav. sheear
raat yoon dil mein teri khoi hoiee yaad aaiee
jaisey veerane mein chupke se bahar aajai
jaisey sehraon mein hole se chaley baade nasem
jaisey beemar ko be vajhe qaraar aajai
Thank you Bittersweet ji
Shair is fantastic :)too good
Song of Mahdi Hasan is good but sounds very romantic,I prefer sad songs of Mahdi Hasan,u can send any thing of ur choice.
Can u complete "piyar bhare do sharmilai nain" if u remember it.
Ha! also I wanted to ask if any body can complete this one,and write the name of the poet....
Ab ke saal ponam mai
Jab to aaegi milnai
humnai sooch rakha hai
raat yu gozarai gai
Nazrai bichhae gai
shook tere qadmou mai.........??????
I love this one,can u complete it?
Cinderella :)
I hope you like the following :
kisee ko de ke dil koee nawaa_sanj-e-fuGHaaN kyoN ho ?
na ho jab dil hee seene meiN to phir muNh meiN zubaaN kyoN ho ?
kiya GHam_KHwaar ne ruswa, lage aag is muhabbat ko
na laaye taab jo GHam ki, woh mera raazdaaN kyoN ho ?
qafas meiN mujh se roodaad-e-chaman kehte na Dar hamdam
giree hai jis pe kal bijlee woh mera aashiyaaN kyoN ho ?
ye kah sakte ho "ham dil meiN naheeN haiN" par ye batlaao
ke jab dil meiN tumhee-tum ho to aaNkho se nihaaN kyoN ho ?
ye fitna aadmee ki KHaana_weeraanee ko kya kam hai ?
hue tum dost jiske, dushman uska aasmaaN kyoN ho ?
yahee hai aazmaana to sataana kis ko kehte haiN ?
`adoo ke ho liye jab tum to mera imtihaaN kyoN ho ?
kaha tumne ke "kyoN ho GHair ke milne meiN ruswaaee ?"
baja kehte ho, sach kehte ho, phir kahiyo ke "haaN kyoN ho ?"
Behen Cindy,
Some REAL sort of Bhai hai hazir with his sis Aarzoo, from Kuwait. I'm just going to be AFK and handing the keyboard to Aarzoo!
Well miss after a long time I arrived here I dont know wether you will read this message or not or I am too late. I read your previous messages and glad to know that you know about Pakistani shairi mean to say lollywood also .
First I would like to give a message to Mr. stud also .I think keh agar aise larkon ko goli maar dee jai to muashrey ka ek bahut barra kachra saaf ho jai ga.
JUST IGNORE HIM And please dont reply such sort of messages.
` This was Aarzoo for a while, but Cindy, being a nice bhai, if I phone THERE, you see THERE, in the U.S., HE will surely scold you on your answers! And now Aarzoo is back again.
gulon ki sharm e latafat ka khayal hai vagarna
meri nigah to kaanton ka intihaab kare
mere maabood kyon tehleeq ki zehmat gawarah ki
nah main dunya ke qabil hoon nah dunya mere qabil
=j
eene bhi neheen daite marne bhi neheen daite
kya tum ne muhabbat ki har rasam mitta dali
alfaaz o muaani mein tafavut neheen laikin
mulla ki azan aur hai mujahid ki azaan aur
So audiences,this was partially ME and partially my sis, to peshe-hidmat hai my Favourite shair(rather a lion):-
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Mere hathon se aur mere honton se khushbooain jaati nahin
Main ne naam-e Muhammad ko likha bahut aur chooma bahut.
W'Salam.
Asalaam Alaikum
Welcome back Enterprise2 bhai & Arzoo :)I’m really glad to see u back in this Gupshup world.Arzoo don’t get angry on Stud bhai…woh meri shaadi mai kursiyaa lagae gai after all he agreed that I’m his sister
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got it dear.This is a place where we can’t ignore some one who is challenging u to answer him/her,so I have answerd all of his messages to show him that girls r smart enough to deal with such kind of situations without any hesitation,and without fighting.
WELL…lets come back to the topic,u have sent very good Ashaar,mera zuaq barta jaraha hai.
Here r some for u ,let me know if u like this kind of Shairee
Jaan Di,Dee Hoee Usi Ki Thi
Haq To Yeh Hai Ke Haq Adda Na Howa
Khuda Se Husn Ne Ek Rooz Yeh Sawaal Kiya
Jhaha Mai Kiyo Na Mujhai To Ne Lazawaal Kiya
Mila Jawab Ke Tasweer-e-Khana Hai Duniya
Shab-e-daraaz Adam Ka Fasana Hai Duniya
(Allama Iqbal)