Re: arsa huwa . . .
maiN naa mehramoN ko ziadah moo naheeN lagaataa… unn kaY ziadah qareeb naheeN jaataa,
naa jaanaY kiyaa ho jaaye
ta’alluq duur kaa achaa
ta’arruff jitna hai woh behtar
guftugu maiN faaslaa achaa 
Re: arsa huwa . . .
in rude terms he means ur poetry sucks :D
Couldn't agree more.
Mod, poetry ka, aur woh bhi EMM, mujhey pagal kuttay nay katta hai kiya. :D
Re: arsa huwa . . .
^ afraid that I would lock ur threads :roman:
seedha seedha keh dou baat nahee karni 
