Apni ya kisi aur ki ankhoon pe shair likhyai

Koyal · March 29, 2008, 3:51am

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v nice poetry every 1 :)

Koyal · March 29, 2008, 3:56am

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aankh rakhtey ho tu is ankh ki tehreer parho
munh se iqrar na karNa tu adat hia us ki

Koyal · March 29, 2008, 3:57am

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aa'nkhooN maiN dheeray dheera tarkay puranay gham
palkooN pe nanay nanay sitaa'ray pro gaa'ey

mama_ki_dua · March 29, 2008, 2:18pm

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amazing :)

mama_ki_dua · March 29, 2008, 2:19pm

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mama_ki_dua · March 29, 2008, 2:21pm

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beautiful poetry

mama_ki_dua · May 8, 2008, 2:26am

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AAg suraj main hoti hai to, jalna zameen ko parthaa hai
AAg suraj main hoti hai to, jalna zameen ko parthaa hai
Mohabat nigahein kerti hain, tarapna dil ko parhtaa hai

Babul_Ki_Gudiya · May 8, 2008, 2:27am

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Pucha jo surkh ankhon ka
tu kaha raat soyii nahi

kaisay kehti kay raat
ronay ki khawish thi
magar royii nahii:)

Babul_Ki_Gudiya · May 8, 2008, 2:28am

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Surkh Aankhon Se Jab Wo Hume Dekhte Hain,
Hum Ghabrakar Aankhen Jhuka Lete Hain,
Kaun Milaye Un Aankhon Se Aankhen,
Suna Hai Wo Aankhon Se Apna Bana Lete Hain.

Babul_Ki_Gudiya · May 8, 2008, 2:29am

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M K D...i love yr eyes more dan yr shairs:P..lol..:)and i love u even more dan yr eyes:)

mama_ki_dua · May 8, 2008, 2:29am

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very nice kambal :) P.S. Maat roya karo, I can't see any of my friends in turmoil :(

Babul_Ki_Gudiya · May 8, 2008, 2:30am

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*Har koi ro k dikhaay ye zorori tu nahi
kuch aankhoo.n main bhi sailaab howa kartey hain*

mama_ki_dua · May 8, 2008, 2:30am

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:) You sound like a guy now :p

Babul_Ki_Gudiya · May 8, 2008, 2:30am

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M K D..hum nahi rotay kisi k liyee ..dont worry..lol..infact shair se gairon ko rulatay hain..full time revenge u knw:P

Babul_Ki_Gudiya · May 8, 2008, 2:32am

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loll...MKD.lol......ahaha..!..tu friends tareefain nahi ker skahtay:)..lol

being_lonely · May 8, 2008, 2:33am

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Asalam u Alaikum !

aankhon se kaho khamoosh rahein
ik doojey se hum bichur chuley
gu aaj se bilkul ujur gaye
ab jeewan hoga zindaan sa
ab yaadein rooz satayingi
ab saansein ruk ruk aayeingi
ab raat ko daer se soyeinge
ab neend se uth uth royeingey
per zabt hai ab laazim chanda
is lumhey ashk bahao mat
tum dil ko aur jalao mat
yeh zakhm e wafa chup chaap sahein
aankhon se kaho khamosh rahein

beIng lOnely !!! siD !!!

mama_ki_dua · May 8, 2008, 2:33am

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Dua ki sorat main us ki khatir Jo mere honton se lafz nikle Jo meri ankhoon se ashk nikle Unhi ke badle main Ae Khuda Jab uska naseeb likhna UROOJ likhna, Kamaal likha Kabhi lafz-e-zawal na likha :)

mama_ki_dua · May 8, 2008, 2:34am

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ker sakte hain main to tang ker rahi thi

being_lonely · May 8, 2008, 2:35am

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Hum Ne Kuch Aaisa Taraasha Hai Teri Aankhon Ko
Log Saahir Ki Misaalon Se Tujhe Jaantay Hain

Babul_Ki_Gudiya · May 8, 2008, 2:36am

*Bheegi Hui Aankhon Ka Yeh Manzar Na Mille Ga *
** Ghar Chor Ke Mat Jao Kaheen Ghar Na Mille Ga **

** Phir Yaad Bohot Aaye Gi Zulfon Ki Ghani Sham **
** Jab Dhoop Mein Saaya Koi Sar Per Na Mille Ga **

** Aansoo Ko Kabhi Oss Ka Qatra Na Samajhna **
** Aisa Tumhein Chahat Ka Samandar Na Mille Ga **

** Is Khowaab Ke Mahool Mein Be-Khowaab Hain Aankhein **
** Jab Neend Bohot Aaye Gi To Bistar Na Mille Ga **

** Yeh Sooch Lo Ab Akhri Saaya Hai Mohabbat **
** Is Dar Se Utho Ge To Koi Dar Na Mille Ga**